OMG PLZ RATE THIS CARD (Updated effect)

[Lost Soul]

I am not changing the Level. Why? Cuz i freaking said so

 

Lore: 1 Tuner monster + 1 more "Flamvell" non-Tuner monsters

When this card is Synchro Summoned, if you control 3 or more monsters with 200 DEF then your opponent loses 2000 Life Points. Once per turn, you can remove from play 2 "Flamvell" monsters from your Graveyard , if you do card's original ATK is 4000 and original DEF is 3000 until this card is removed from the Field. This card cannot attack the turn you activate any of its effects.

[ragnarok1945]

that burn effect won't happen too often, so it's ok.

 

For the 4 monsters removed from play, where are you removing them from play FROM? And you should have said by doing that, this card's stats become 4000/3000 until the End Phase

 

7.8/10

[Lost Soul]

oops i messed up on the effect. it is supposed to be while this card is face-up on the field

[Sorrow.]

Hmmm Pretty good Effect I'd have that card in my deck.

8/10

[Tunerwizard]

Nice effect, I think the Lv should decrease by a few, or you should change it to "1 or more non-Tuner "Flamvell" monsters"

8/10

[GunMetalDevil]

youve got some ocg errors and the pic is overused, but the effect is definately original and balanced.

 

8/10

[Leturn Master]

This card isn't worth the 10 levels on monsters you'd need to pay for it... I'd make it Level 7, and just tone down the effect a little (seeing as there's not much of a chance of them being used anywho... especially if you need to tribute FOUR monsters. Heck, I wouldn't bother wasting them all. -4 myself for a +1000 ATK bonus on ONE monster? Hellz no..).

 

Flamvell Prince | Lvl. 7

Pyro / Synchro / Effect | FIRE

ATK/2600 DEF/200

Lore: 1 "Flamvell" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Flamvell" monsters

When this card is Synchro Summoned, if you control 2 or more monsters with 200 or less DEF, decrease your opponent's Life Points by 2000. Once per turn, you can remove from play 2 "Flamvell" monsters you control to increase the original ATK of this card by 900. You can only use this effect once.

 

That'd be so much nicer. You get a decent ATK without as difficult of a summon. You also get that possible burn (but it's doubtful). His effect would now balance to give him a smaller boost (from an already smaller number), but won't come with the drawback of a 4-card disadvantage (no one in their right mind would do that..) AND you should be able to give him an attack with his effects without unbalancing him.

 

This is where I would base the card, but it's entirely your opinion.

 

Warm Regards,

:mrgreen:

[SSJGoten]

7.1/10 nice effect

[Lost Soul]

i will keep all of this stuff in mind. ty and bump

[.:Incognito:.]

This is a new "Flamvell" card i have made. Plz rate. I am also thinking about making a "Flamvell" set' date=' what do you think?

 

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Lore: 1 "Flamvell" Tuner + 1 more "Flamvell" non-Tuner monsters

When this card is Synchro Summoned, if you control 2 or more monsters with 200 DEF then your opponent loses 2000 Life Points. Once per turn, you can remove from play 4 "Flamvell" monsters. This card's original ATK is 4000 and DEF is 3000. This card cannot attack the turn you activate any of its effects.

The first effect happens pretty often... It has 200 Def doesn't it.

Where does it remove them from?

I think it's a bit OP'd. 7/10

WAIT, it's level 10? Oh then it's not OP'd.

9/10

Oh and, I lol'd at the title.

[xana119]

I think you did a good job on the card, however, the level is too high, just tone that down a bit. but still, nice card!

[Mazerrick]

=/

 

1 "Flamvell" Tuner + 1 more "Flamvell" non-Tuner monsters

When this card is Synchro Summoned, if you control 2 or more monsters with 200 DEF then your opponent loses 2000 Life Points. Once per turn, you can remove from play 4 "Flamvell" monsters(To Do What?). This card's original ATK is 4000 and DEF is 3000(Then Why Don't you just have the ATK and DEF at 4000 and 3000?). This card cannot attack the turn you activate any of its effects.(Then whats the point of having its ATK at 4000?)

 

Fix it

6/10

[Lost Soul]

I probably should rephrase the effect. BUT I AM NOT CHANGING THE LEVEL

[Mazerrick]

I still think you should take off "This card cannot attack the turn you activate any of its effects. "

But It's SO MUCH BETTERR

8.5/10

[.:Incognito:.]

Cosmic he removes the 4 monsters to increase the attack >_>.

[Lost Soul]

well, if i did that then there wouldnt really be any side effects and 4000 can kill almost any monster in the game

[.:Incognito:.]

Dude lv 10 is really hard to summon. And so what I would just activate smashing ground.

[Tunerwizard]

Thats a nice card probably to OPed to be seen in a real Duel. However, I like the idea!

8.9/10

[Lost Soul]

Mystical Space Typhoon, or i will make a card that negates all Spell Cards

[.:Incognito:.]

>_< If you say that than mokey mokey with a mist body is overpowered. So what it's a big beatstick. It's pretty hard to summon and like I said before I would just use smashing ground.

[Lost Soul]

lol then i guess mokey mokey with mist body is op'ed what i would do stands!

[.:Incognito:.]

>_< Are you freaking kidding me? Attacking isn't everything.

[Lost Soul]

i know. you have to imply strategy, defenses, effects, and some direct damage helps to. Since attacking isnt everything, just use all of its effect in 1 turn so you can attack the next with it