shatteredfox Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 I've been scrolling and I've really been enjoying the shadow memes on a particular site I visit, and as such I decided to see how many I can turn into yugioh cards. Well enough of me, enjoy~[spoiler=Cards][spoiler=Incomplete] [spoiler=lore]Special Summon 1 "Kaji-residue Monster Token" (Pyro-Type/FIRE/3 Star/ATK 100/DEF 100) in Attack Position on your side of the field at the end of each turn that this monster remains faced-up on the field. During your Battle Phase remove 1 star from all "Kaji-residue Monster Tokens." on the field, if you cannot, inflict 1000 Damage to your opponent and destroy the token. [spoiler=lore]When this card is attacked by a monster your opponent controls. Remove that card from play, during Damage Step calculate battle damage. If this card is still on the field increase the ATK equal to the ATK of the monster removed from play. When this card attacks, revert his ATK to 0. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 Mmm pretty Balanced...OCG problem. This card also counts as a Spellcaster-Type monster.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shatteredfox Posted December 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 Mmm pretty Balanced...OCG problem. This card also counts as a Spellcaster-Type monster.7/10 you know I am seeing alot today..Maybe it's just me(or that no one else is up at 1:19AM xD) Also it's just fiend, I couldn't really decide which one. I ultimately decided fiend since spellcasters usually have spell counter related effect. I just stupidly forgot to erase it, I dunno how. as for the OCG, can I know what it is? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scyire Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 Fairly good pic.OCG needs help.I don't really like the effect either. The -1000 life points / turn is a pretty sloppy way to make in balanced. 2.5/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 it's nice and balanced but the effect is bland 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vinsent Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 OCG Fix: "When this card destroys an opponent's monster as a result of battle, you gain Life Points Equal to the destroyed monster's DEF. During your End Phase pay 1000 Life Points, if you cannot, destroy this card." (could be send this card to the Graveyard, not 100% sure) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CanineV2 Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 It's interesting. But fix the OCG as it is below. 8/10 OCG Fix: "When this card destroys an opponent's monster as a result of battle' date=' you gain Life Points Equal to the destroyed monster's DEF. During your End Phase pay 1000 Life Points, if you cannot, destroy this card." (could be send this card to the Graveyard, not 100% sure)[/quote'] I think it can be either of the two. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chiri Tsukikawa Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 I like that card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 uppercase life points, put a comma after End Phase, lowercase card, then instead of remove 1000 Life Points, say "you lose 1000 Life Points" are the only errors here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shatteredfox Posted December 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 7, 2009 *UPDATED*- Added 2 new cards.- Added 0.5 card(complete but no picture, still need to fix it in Photoshop)- Edited Carnivorous Bride.- Fixed OCG on Carnivorous Bride Thanks to the people that commented so far, especially about my OCG which will be common. I have been on so many yugioh wiki pages, and read guides however I am still struggling with OCG ^_^" I will get there and than you can finally stop your bit-End Posting. ((Bitter and cruel opinions)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Kiba~ Posted December 7, 2009 Report Share Posted December 7, 2009 i dont see why ppl complain about ocg alot. but i give you a 11/10. Great pics and i think ocg is good, so other ppl dont judge me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shatteredfox Posted December 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 7, 2009 i dont see why ppl complain about ocg alot. but i give you a 11/10. Great pics and i think ocg is good' date=' so other ppl dont judge me.[/quote'] Well this is a site to emulate yugioh cards and it's understandable. + If it that's bad they have every right, however I wish when they do complain that they tell me what I did wrong or push me in the right direction so I can improve. Anyways, thanks but even if you give me a 11. I'm curious if you think if the effects are overpowered or not, or if they even make sense? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CanineV2 Posted December 7, 2009 Report Share Posted December 7, 2009 The lore for the 3rd Monster, Masu. When this card is attacked by a monster your opponent controls. Remove that card from play' date=' during Damage Step calculate battle damage. If this card is still on the field increase the ATK equal to the ATK of the monster removed from play. When this card attacks, revert his ATK to 0.[/quote'] OCG Fix (Maybe): When this card is attacked by a monster your opponent controls, remove it from play after the Damage Step. Increase this card's ATK by the (Original?) ATK of the monster. When this card attacks, reduce this card's ATK to 0 after the Damage Step. 10/10 Just because I like them. (Note: I'm not good at OCG Fixes yet so.... yeah.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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