The Borg Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 This set has to do with the duel terminal/ hidden arsenal universe with a species of parasites infecting major planets and species to try and take over it. Many old cards will get remade. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 EDIT:Thats more like itCat Warrior, Like I said OP'ed No circulation.Assimilated Wingman: Correct Offical Card Grammar (OCG) (This card cannot be tributed. This card cannot be affected by Warrior-Type monsters effect. It is a Vanilla Type that makes no sense, if you going to make a Vanilla Type atleast make it worthy please! Also OP'ed, No Circulation5/10 Its ok for a New Member.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Borg Posted December 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 I accidentally only posted one of the 3 current creatures. Now 2 are up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSJGoten Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 Well a 4.9/10 needs a bit of work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Borg Posted December 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 I edited cat warrior so here is the new one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leturn Master Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 A few things: 1) I see your booster is named "Parasite Vortex"... interesting choice. Why is that?2) Your "Cat Warrior" is overpowered. I think "Luster Dragon" has the highest combined stats of any Normal monster with 1900 ATK... and he's only got 1600 DEF. This guy is 1900/1900, which is Overpowered... easily.3) I don't get your "Assimilated Wingman" AT ALL... it's WATER, I don't know what the picture is, it has no registered Type, and I'm only halfway sure about the effect. It's effect w/stats and level are decent...4) You use the imageshack application on YCMaker to post your cards. It cuts off the bottom, which really annoys me... you should use Photobucket or something else.5) Do crop your pictures... please.6) You actually used a NORMAL Set ID and NO circulation. PLUS you had the REGULAR Serial Number style.... that's +rep material, even if the cards aren't good. Warm Regards,:mrgreen: EDIT: "Cat Warrior" is better... I'd have to see support for him, and the rest of the booster, before making a judgment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Borg Posted December 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 Updated Assimilated Wingman. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leturn Master Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 "Rabbit" -- Okayyy... it works. Though the picture isn't Yu-Gi-OH-ish..."Parasite- 1111" -- not useful, seeing as no one in their right mind runs a WIND Deck in the meta..."Cat Wizard" -- there only seems to be 1 "Cat" monsters thus far... so I'll hold my breath."Assimilated Wingman" -- OVERPOWERED. If you want me to fully review a card, PM me... and put more effort into two or three cards at a time, instead of filling up a thread with a bunch (as it seems you are about to do..) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Borg Posted December 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 The best cards in this set are wind type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 Rabbit, Good enough, its fair, Effect confuses me.Parasite, Its pretty much the same thing as Mind Control.Cat Wizard, Under Powered because it has no DEF ups. Mmmmm 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 fake types, OPed effects your vanilla also needs spell/trap support to make it powerful 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Borg Posted December 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 Guys I will change the parasite type in a minute. Now parasites are all psychic monsters This is the the third best parasite in the set. The best two are yet to come though. Cat support is coming up next along with the first Ally of Justice in it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Borg Posted December 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 Any Comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delspencerdeltorro Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 Wingman seems to get more powerful with each revision. :S Also, it's hard to imagine Cat Warrior going head-to-head with Gemini Elf or Vorceraider. There are also a lot of OCG errors, but I don't care about them as much as some people on here. You'll get better in time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Borg Posted December 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 Any more comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 Can't... contain... the cute... <333 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Borg Posted December 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 There will be non-cute monsters in this set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Borg Posted December 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 7, 2009 Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted December 8, 2009 Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 1st Card: Effect: Ups...it's a vannilla!!! PIC: Bad...never use real life pictures... OCG: It's a vannilla... ATK/DEF: A tiny bit OP...it should be level 5... 2nd Card: Effect: It's balanced but it's a bit bland :( PIC: Bad...what's it??? OCG:[spoiler=Bad]This card cannot be used as tribute for a Tribute Summon. This card is unaffected by Warrior-Type monsters effects. Hope this is right :D:D:D ATK/DEF: Seems OK for a level 5^^ PS: Don't use fake types...that's bad...:( 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Deadpool- Posted December 8, 2009 Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 hey well i like parasites but try to get backgrounds other than that i give it a 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Borg Posted December 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 Guys always look at the newest version of cards before posting. This is the first special synchro. This is how you summon it. Ally of Justice card #1!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Borg Posted December 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2009 Any posts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted December 9, 2009 Report Share Posted December 9, 2009 Aiku: I smell something... it's a critic! OCG (Origianl Card Grammar): The OCG of your cards are terrible. You don't use the right way to explain the card's effect whatever it's Effect Monster or Spell. Please, work on the OCG for future cards. Effects: Already seen and read. Nothing special about the Cats or Parasite effects. Just the simple and plain basic of YGO, nothing more. Image and Name: The images of the Parasites need something better. It's not a square or a triangle that's gonna make me intimated. Go on artist's site like deviantart.com and find good draw and not just pictures of cats and castles. Overall: 1.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Borg Posted December 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 I am making a cooler parasite. I will find more art for the older ones and update them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Borg Posted December 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 Bump. This is a newer improved parasite. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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