Cloister Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 [align=center]The BloodburntNew Archetype by Tomtekorv [spoiler=[b]Information[/b]] The Bloodburnt Monsters all have different Attributes and Types (which is pretty rare), but they are connected by 2 things: their effects and their names. The effects are focused on different things, but mostly to send cards from the hand or Deck to the Graveyard and vice versa. They work well with eachother if you know how to use them right. I tried to focus on having "Bloodburnt" in their effects as many times as possible to increase the chance of getting the right cards onto the field. [spoiler=Suggestions] If you have any suggestions about the card(s), please PM me! NEWEST CARD! EN017 Bloodburnt FortuneSpell CardContinouos Effect:As long as this card remains face-up on the field, "Bloodburnt" monsters cannot be removed from play. Each time a card is drawn or sent to the Graveyard from your hand by the effect of a "Bloodburnt" monster, you can pay 400 Life Points to add 1 card from your Graveyard to your Deck and shuffle it. Then draw 1 card. If this card is destroyed during your opponent's turn while you control 1 or more face-up "Bloodburnt" monsters, you can discard 1 card to add this card to your hand. [spoiler=[size=medium]Monsters[/size]] [spoiler=[color=#32CD32]EN001[/color]] Bloodburnt FortuneSpell CardContinous Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except from your Graveyard by Tributing "Bloodburnt" monsters you control whose combined Level equals 8 or more. When this card is Summoned add 2 Spell or Trap Cards from your Graveyard to your hand. If this card is attacked, you can increase the ATK of this card equal to the ATK or DEF of the attacking monster (until the end of the Damage Step) . Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to add 1 card from your Deck to your hand. Then shuffle your Deck. If a "Bloodburnt" monster is attacked, you can switch the attack target to this card. [spoiler=[color=#FFD700]EN002[/color]] Herla, Breaker of the Bloodburnt****LIGHTThunderATK 1800/DEF 1700 Effect:When this card is Summoned, add 1 card from your Graveyard to your Deck and shuffle your Deck. Then draw 1 card. If the drawn card was a Monster Card, inflict 500 damage to your opponent. If the drawn card was a Spell or Trap Card, you take damage equal to the number of cards on the field x 150. [spoiler=[color=#32CD32]EN003[/color]] Karvesal, Master of the Bloodburnt**********WINDSpellcasterATK ?/DEF ? Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 3 or more face-down "Bloodburnt" monsters. When this card is Summoned, add 1 card from your Graveyard to your Deck and draw 1 card. Once per turn, if this is the only face-up monster you control, you can destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's side of the field. The original ATK and DEF of this card are equal to the Level of the Tributed monsters used to Special Summon this card x 200. When a "Bloodburnt" monster is destroyed by battle, you can discard 1 card to add the destroyed monster to your hand. You can Tribute 1 face-up "Bloodburnt" monster you control to negate the activation of a Spell or Trap Card, and destroy it. [spoiler=[color=#4B0082]EN004[/color]] Gilmafer, Reaper of the Bloodburnt****DARKFiendATK 1000/DEF 500 Effect:Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, if your opponent controls more monsters than you, you can add 1 card to your hand from your Deck and shuffle it. If it was a Monster Card, increase the ATK of this card by 600. If it was a Spell or Trap Card, discard it to the Graveyard. When this card inflicts Battle damage, both players draw 1 card. [spoiler=[color=#8B4513]EN005[/color]] Kryym, Worm of the Bloodburnt**EARTHInsectATK 200/DEF 400 Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned. When this card is Summoned, select 1 Level 5 or lower "Bloodburnt" monster from your Graveyard and add to your hand. If this card is destroyed the turn it is Summoned, you can return this card to your Deck and shuffle it, to Special Summon the monster added to your hand by this card's effect and halve its ATK until the end of your next Battle Phase. [spoiler=[color=#4B0082]EN007[/color]] Onum, Eraser of the Bloodburnt*DARKZombieATK 1200/DEF 700 Effect:You can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard by Tributing 1 face-up "Bloodburnt" monster you control. If this card is Special Summoned by its own effect, you can add the top card of your Deck to the bottom of your Deck, to return 1 card in your Graveyard to the top of your Deck. This card loses ATK equal to the number of cards in your hand x 100. You can discard 2 cards to negate the activation of an opponent's Spell Card and destroy it. Your opponent then draws 1 card. [spoiler=[color=#32CD32]EN008[/color]] Auy, Dragon of the Bloodburnt*****WINDDragonATK 3000/DEF 0 Effect:You can Special Summon this card from your Deck or Graveyard if you control no monster(s) while you have 3 or more "Bloodburnt" monsters in your Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned by its own effect, you can select 1 "Bloodburnt" monster in your Graveyard and add it to your Deck and shuffle it. Decrease the ATK of this card by 400 for each "Bloodburnt" monster in your Graveyard. If this card is Tribute Summoned, discard 2 cards from your hand and remove them from play. [spoiler=[color=#4B0082]EN010[/color]] Gilmorf, Slayer of the Bloodburnt******DARKFiendATK 2000/DEF 1000 Effect:You can Special Summon this card by discarding 2 cards from your hand to your Graveyard while you have exactly 3 "Bloodburnt" monsters in your Graveyard. Each time this card attacks, draw 1 card. If you drew a Monster Card, discard it. If you drew a Spell or Trap Card, you can add up to 2 cards from your Graveyard to the top of your Deck. If your opponent controls a Level 8 or higher monster, you can halve the ATK of this card (until the end of the Battle Phase) to have this card attack directly. You can discard 2 cards to destroy 1 monster on the field. [spoiler=[color=#8B4513]EN011[/color]] Erri, Warrior of the Bloodburnt ***EARTHWarriorATK 900/DEF 800 Effect:During your Standby Phase, you can Tribute this face-up monster to add up to 3 cards from your Graveyard to your Deck and shuffle it. If you activated this effect, you can add cards from your Graveyard to your Deck equal to the number of monsters on the field and pay 500 Life Points for each card added to your Deck by this effect. Then shuffle your Deck. [spoiler=[color=#8B4513]EN012[/color]] Graowlr, Pet of the Bloodburnt****EARTHBeastATK 1900/DEF 1200 Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. If this card is Special Summoned by the effect of a "Bloodburnt" monster, you can add 2 cards from your Deck to your hand, and discard 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard to add 1 card from your Graveyard to your hand. Once per turn, you can decrease the ATK of this card by 300 to draw 1 card. [spoiler=[color=#4B0082]EN013[/color]] Mulm, Fear of the Bloodburnt****DARKZombieATK 1600/DEF Effect:You can Special Summon this card by Tributing 1 face-up "Onum, Eraser of the Bloodburnt" you control. If this card is Special Summoned by its own effect this card gains ATK equal to the number of "Bloodburnt" monsters in your Graveyard x 100. Once per turn, you can discard 2 cards to your Graveyard from your hand to destroy 1 card on the field. If you destroyed a monster with this effect, add the top card in your Deck to the bottom of your Deck to increase the ATK of this card by 400. When this card battles, you can add 1 card from your Graveyard to your Deck and draw 1 card. [spoiler=[color=#FF0000]EN015[/color]] Almendr, Lizard of the Bloodburnt**FIREReptileATK 200/DEF 200 Effect:You can Special Summon this card from your hand by discarding 2 cards from your hand to the Graveyard. If this card is destroyed by battle, you can pay 800 Life Points to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Bloodburnt" monster from your hand or Graveyard. [spoiler=[color=#0000CD]EN016[/color]] Ispregar, Elemental of the Bloodburnt********WATERAquaATK 3000/DEF 2600 Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 3 Level 4 face-up "Bloodburnt" monsters whose combined ATK equals this card's combined ATK and DEF. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 2, you can discard 2 cards to add 1 Level 4 or lower "Bloodburnt" monster from your Graveyard to your hand. Both players lose Life Points equal to the ATK of the added monster. If this card is the only face-up monster you control, destroy it and add it to your hand. [spoiler=[size=medium]Spells[/size]] [spoiler=[color=#9370DB]EN006[/color]] Bloodburnt ReturnSpell CardNormal Effect:Activate only while you control no monster(s). Discard 2 cards to add 1 "Bloodburnt" monster from your Deck and 1 from your Graveyard to your hand. [spoiler=[color=#9370DB]EN014[/color]] Bloodburnt ReleaseSpell CardEquip Effect:Equip only to a "Bloodburnt" monster. The equipped monster gains 500 ATK. If the equipped monster would be destroyed by battle, you can send the top 2 cards from your Deck to the Graveyard to Special Summon the destroyed monster and equip it with this card. During each of your End Phases you must discard 1 card. If you do not, this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard. [spoiler=[size=medium]Traps[/size]] [spoiler=[color=#FF1493]EN009[/color]] Bloodburnt ShieldTrapNormal Effect:This card can only be activated during either player's Battle Phase when a monster declares an attack. Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Bloodburnt" monster from your hand or Graveyard. If the Special Summoned monster is destoyed this turn, you can discard 1 card to add the destroyed monster to your hand. All battle damage inflicted to a player this turn becomes 0. Feel free to comment![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 Hm, good for a trump card. I'd advise giving them a central focus in effects rather than simply supporting each other (EX: E-heros focus on fusions, D-Heros focus on swarm and drawing)Most custom sets, like the one I posted recently, have some unifying goal. 8/10 so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 good card 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted December 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 Thanks for the rate :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 looks really cool, but it can get really strong, a bit too strong.pic is cool, no OCG errors so 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted December 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 thanks HP Doom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 *200 is just fine, I doubt it'll get too powerful before your opponent can counter it anyway the OCG looks just fine the way it is, so I'll rate it 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted December 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 thanks ragnarok ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted December 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 added new card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 8, 2009 Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 the only problem with the new card is you didn't say the atk gain effect is a temporary one and that would make this card gain too much atk right off the bat, and therefore will be OPed 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted December 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2009 well, it isn't a temporary, but I'll fix it, thanks for your comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamesgent111 Posted December 9, 2009 Report Share Posted December 9, 2009 hmmm, quite nice you can make something out of this, 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted December 9, 2009 Report Share Posted December 9, 2009 Your OCG seems perfect.Loved the pics, they are amazing (8Really long effects you got in the 2 old cards :LSeems great for me.I would give you 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted December 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2009 thanks :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 10, 2009 Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 see your new Herla card is much more balanced than the previous one the burn effects were small, so it's balanced, I'll rate it 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted December 10, 2009 Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 Good, you gave them a theme to support rather than simply each other. The second 1 is OP though, It makes OTK's so easy being able to search ANY card. 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted December 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 Well, for Selifion, you have to discard 1 card, so you lose 1 card and get 1 card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted December 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 updated gilmafer added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DMZ Posted December 12, 2009 Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 8/10 These can get extremely strong with a few Spell Cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted December 12, 2009 Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 When this card is Summoned, return 1 card from your Graveyard to your Deck and draw 1 card. If the drawn card was a Monster, inflict 500 damage to your opponent. If the drawn card was a Spell or Trap Card, take damage equal to the number of cards on the field x 200. A bit UP, the 200 burn effect to yourself seems to high to me. But it's a solid and good effect like the pic, but you could have cropped it a bit more. 9/10 for the new card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 12, 2009 Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 the OCG correction has already been pointed out, glad to see you removed the 200 burn effect, otherwise it'd get UPed the rest of the effect is solid, so I'll rate it 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted December 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 updated Herla and added new card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 neat effect you got there it's a shame the special summoned monster will have its atk halved PERMANENTLY though, otherwise this'd be excellent 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted December 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 I will change that, thanks for comment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 15, 2009 Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 Bloodburnt's effect is a little short, but it's suited for the job shame you have to lose TWO cards from you hand though 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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