[Tom] Bloodburnt's Return! - (17/??) new Spell added -

[Cloister]

I didn't want to make it too strong since the monsters themselves are pretty strong

[Cloister]

added EN008:)

[-DOOM]

For the newest card, you should add a additional "from Graveyard returning to deck" effect.

 

i don't like cards which effects can be activated while they're in the deck, i seems just wrong and illogical to me. But the rest is fine, OCG, pic and balance.

 

EDIT: Because you can tribute summon this card, it's OP yet.

8/10 i would add "this card cannot be normal summoned or set....... and so on.

[Cloister]

or?

"When/if this card is Normal Summoned or Set, decrease the ATK of this card by 1000"?

 

Thanks for comment HPD :D:D

[-DOOM]

this would be even better:D i think 800 is enough then

[Cloister]

thanks, will change right away! :D:D

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added restrictions to Dragon

[ragnarok1945]

it's a balanced lv5 3000 atk monster

 

to me the picture doesn't look too dragon like though

 

8.9/10

[Cloister]

thanks :D

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added first Trap Card

[ragnarok1945]

interesting, so for the special summoned monster it's like a negate attack effect, with a card discard

 

I'd certainly use this

 

9.6/10

[Cloister]

thank u rag ^^

[-DOOM]

This card can only be activated during either player's Battle Phase when a monster declares an attack. Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Bloodburnt" monster from your hand or Graveyard. If the Special Summoned monster is destoyed this turn, you can discard 1 card to add the destroyed monster to your hand. All battle damage inflicted to a player this turn becomes 0.

 

this effect seems really cool! a bit OP IMO..... only a bit:D

9/10

[Cloister]

I think so too, but what the hell! :D

[-DOOM]

it's a nice effect though:D

[Cloister]

THANKS FOR EDIT, WILL FIX IT :D and also add new card!

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added monster

[~Riku~]

What do they have in common, besides their name?

And can I have Eraser's pic?

8/10

[ragnarok1945]

nice card recovery effect for the new card

 

personally though I'd remove the last sentence in the card text (last effect basically), that seems to make the card OPed

 

7.8/10

[Cloister]

I'll change it or remove it

 

thanks ^^

[G-Break]

cool cards anyway..

pic are great.. 9/10

[Cloister]

well, they have adding cards to your hand/Deck/Graveyard in common

[Cloister]

Added new monster (don't complain about overused pic, I know that already)

[ragnarok1945]

if it's that Graowlr card, you forgot the "or Set" in the first half of the 1st sentence

 

sentence 2 and 3 look like they can be combined into one sentence

 

overall it's still a good effect though

 

8.9/10

[Cloister]

I'll change that later when I have time

[ParadoxDuelist]

Re-write:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. If this card is Special Summoned by the effect of a "Bloodburnt" monster, you can add 2 cards from your Deck to your hand. You can discard 1 card from your hand to add 1 card from your Graveyard to your hand. Once per turn, you can decrease the ATK of this card by 300 to draw 1 card.

 

Nice card. I'm only rating your newest card because I'm gonna give myself a headache re-writing ALL of your cards but I'm sure they're just as good as this one. A Rank.

[Cloister]

thanks, I'll change the OCG when I have time

[Cloister]

Added card