Fallen Planet Set new archetype [ 10 / ??? ] added monster

[Cloister]

[align=center][spoiler=[b]Monsters[/b]]

 

[spoiler=[b]Effect Monsters[/b]]

 

[spoiler=Heresi - Warrior of Fallen Planet]

Lore:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand if this card is the only card in your hand. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, your opponent's monsters cannot attack the same turn he/she Summons a monster. When this card attacks, you can draw 1 card. If it was a Monster Card, increase the ATK of this card by 800. If it was a Trap Card, increase the attack of your opponent's monster by 800. If it was a Spell Card, decrease the ATK of your opponent's monster by 400 and increase the ATK of this card by 400.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Dervind - Gunner of Fallen Planet]

Lore:

When this card is Summoned you can draw 1 card. If it was a Monster Card, increase the ATK of this card by 500. If it was a Trap Card, decrease the ATK of this card by 500. If it was a Spell Card, destroy 1 card on the field. When this card is destroyed by battle, add 1 "Fallen Planet" monster from your Deck to your hand and shuffle your Deck.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Gream - Spy of Fallen Planet]

Lore:

When this card attacks. draw 1 card. If if was a Monster Card, decrease the ATK of this card by 800. If it was a Trap Card, decrease the ATK of this card by 1600. If it was a Spell Card, decrease the ATK of this card by 1200.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Denton - Gunmaster of Fallen Planet]

Lore:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned exept by Tributing all face up "Fallen Planet" monster you control. When this card is summoned, decrease the ATK of all your opponent's monsters by 500. When this card attacks, draw 1 card. If it was a Monster Card, increase the ATK of 1 "Fallen Planet" monster you control (exept this card) by 500. If it was a Trap Card, decrease the ATK of 1 "Fallen Planet" monster you control by 500. If it was a Spell Card, increase the ATK of all monsters on the field (exept this card) by 500.

 

 

 

[spoiler= Aloin - Dragonfly of Fallen Planet]

Lore:

When this card is Summoned, you can draw 1 card. If it was a Monster Card, increase the ATK of this card by 500. If it was a Trap Card, increase the ATK of 1 of your opponent's monsters by 500. If it was a Spell Card, destroy this card and add 1 card from your Graveyard to your hand.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Herim - Shadowmaster of Fallen Planet]

Lore:

This card cannot be destroyed by Trap Cards. When this card is attacked, draw 1 card. If it was a Monster Card, increase the ATK of 1 "Fallen Planet" monster on the field by 300. If it was a Trap Card decrease the ATK of 1 "Fallen Planet" monster on the field by 300. If it was a Spell Card, return 2 cards from your Graveyard to your Deck. Then shuffle your Deck.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Ulder - Crazyclaw of Fallen Planet]

Lore:

If this card is used as a Fusion Material Monster for the Summoning of a Fusion Monster, draw 1 card. If it was a Monster Card, you can discard it to add this card to your hand. If it was a Trap Card, return this card to the bottom of your Deck. If it was a Spell Card, increase the ATK of all face-up Fusion Monsters on the field by 200.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Rineg - Soldier of Fallen Planet]

Lore:

When this card attacks, you can draw 1 card. If it was a Monster Card, destroy this card and gain 700 Life Points. If it was a Trap Card, discard it to add 1 "Fallen Planet" monster to your hand from your Graveyard. If it was a Spell Card, increase the ATK of this card by 400.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Fusion Monsters[/b]]

 

[spoiler=Henreg - Elite Soldier of Fallen Planet]

Lore:

"Rineg - Soldier of Fallen Planet" + "Herim - Shadowmaster of Fallen Planet".

This card cannot be Summoned except by Fusion Summoned. This card cannot be destroyed by a cards effect. When this card is summoned, draw 1 card. If it was a Monster card, increase the ATK and DEF of all "Fallen Planet monsters you control by 800 (except this card). If it was a Trap Card, decrease the ATK of all "Fallen Planet" monsters you control by 500. If it was a Spell Card, draw 3 cards. If it was 1 Spell, 1 Trap and 1 Monster Card, destroy all cards on the field (exept this card). Then return 5 cards from your Graveyard to your Deck. Then shuffle your Deck. This card cannot attack if you control no monsters.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Spells[/b]]

 

[spoiler=Mechanical Mayhem]

Lore:

Tribute all "Fallen Planet" monsters you control. Destroy all cards on the field and Special Summon 2 Level 4 or lower "Fallen Planet" monsters from your Graveyard. Both players lose Life Points equal to the number of cards destroyed by this effect x 100.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Traps[/b]]

 

Sorry, none yet

 

 

 

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[Vailan]

All opponent's monsters or just one of them?

 

Great pic and great effect.

 

9/10

[Bengal]

Not bad, the image is alright, and although the OCG is the older type it is pretty decent.

 

The card seems fairly balanced, even though it has relatively low ATK and DEF, it does have some draw power and the ATK can continue to increase if monster card continue to be drawn.

 

It could be pretty useful during the turn it is Summoned, if it's during your opponent's turn. The only trait that makes it a little less playable is unpredictability of the effect.

 

8/10

[SgtExell]

Basicaly same as the other two have mentioned so good i like it 9/10!

[darkalterkazuma]

nice, you get a 4/5

[-DOOM]

First part is fine i think.

When this card attacks, you can draw 1 card and based on its type apply the proper effect: ● Monster Card: This card gains 800 ATK. ● Trap Card: All monster your opponent controls gain 800 ATK. ● Spell Card: All monsters your opponent controls lose 800 ATK and this card gains 500 ATK

 

 

 

he/she = they

Pic is nice, card is well balanced, so 9/10

[Metal Skull]

Seems really fine, great pic and effect^^

Everything fits and effect seems balanced^^

But i really don't think it should be WIND^^

Anyway LOL nice card 8/10

[Lord Smeagle]

Epic effect, good pic, name makes sense. 9.5/10.

[ragnarok1945]

the only thing that confuses me is trap effect when you said to boost your opponent's monster by 800.

 

Are we talking just 1, or all of them here?

 

9/10

[.:Incognito:.]

Hmmm Interesting I'm confused what do you mean here:When this card is Summoned, your opponent cannot attack the same turn he/she summons a monster.

Do you mean as long as this card remains on your side of the field, your opponent blah blah blah or what?

7/10

[Cloister]

I have noticed that there are some OCG errors in the card and I'll change it soon

Thanks for noticing and telling me

 

It is just the monster that this card attacks that gets 800 ATK

[Tunerwizard]

Nice, id like to see the fixed version though!

7/10

[Cloister]

Updated

[Cloister]

Updated

[Chaos Flame]

The only thing I see wrong with this is the unpredictability of te effects. Unless this archetype could control the order of the top so many cards of their deck, sort of like big eye, it wouldn't get used much 8/10

[ragnarok1945]

for Gream you should give it an effect to boost the atk back up, though not as quickly

 

otherwise this will become too weak too fast

 

9/10

[Cloister]

thanks ragnarok, I'll give it another effect

[Cloister]

Updated added three cards

[-DOOM]

Pics are awesome. Where are they from? effects seem good so far, i found some minor OCG errors. I like the idea and specially the pics, 9/10

[Cloister]

the pics are from Deviantart (almost all pics on all my cards are from DA)

 

Thanks HPD :D

 

Can you point out the errors?

[-DOOM]

First card:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except from your hand if you have no other cards in your hand. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, all monsters your opponent controls cannot attack in the turn they're Summoned. When this card attacks, you can draw 1 card. If it was a Monster Card, this card gains 800 ATK. If it was a Trap Card, the attacked monster gains 800 ATK. If it was a Spell Card, this card gains 400 ATK and the attack target loses 400 ATK.

 

generally, it is always "lose" or "gain" instead of "increase" or "decrease" ATK. If you want to change the Level of a monster, you have to use increase/decrease.

[ragnarok1945]

yeah with the new ones the effects are much better

 

HP Doom already pointed out the OCG errors, so I'll rate this 9/10

[Cloister]

thanks :D

 

I'll change the OCG and check if I myself can find any other OCG errors

[Akumakagemaru]

Awesome pics. Can't wait to see more.

[Cloister]

thanks