shiny_mike Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 This is the first card i have made that i have not used google images for hope you enjoy it. Please leave your comments8)all corrections have been made as far as i can see please tell me if i have any more mistakes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 Blurry pic.You spelled Warrior wrong."Once per turn, if a DARK, LIGHT, FIRE, WATER or WIND monster was destroyed, this card gains 200 ATK points."Way simple effect.Try again 8)5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 no...just horrible...PIC is blurry...OCG errors...OP and UP at the same time...OP because it gains ATK like each time it destroys a monster and really UP for high level...It stays UP overall...2/10 Keep trying ;)[spoiler=OCG CORRECTION]If this card destroyed a DARK, LIGHT, FIRE, WATER or WIND monster as a result of battle, this card gains 200 ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 Blurry pic.Warroir = Warrior. OCG fix:"Each time this card destroys a DARK, LIGHT, FIRE WATER, or WIND attribute monster, increase the ATK of this card by 200 points" Hm, and it is already very powerful. Perhaps you should lower the ATK a bit. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiny_mike Posted December 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 thx for the comments i changed the card a bit with the attack and defense fixed warrior and made him a bit weaker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tunerwizard Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 You should capatilize some of the words in this. EX. black knight-Black Knight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiny_mike Posted December 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 You should capatilize some of the words in this. EX. black knight-Black Knight already done thxs for the tip Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 Now it's better, but change as a result of a battle to by battle 8)7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 1- Blurry pic2- Classic Name3- Simple Effect4- Too high LVSORRY 2/10(for trying) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 too OPed of an effect without any drawbacks plus the effect itself is too short, give it another effect 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThorGodOfThunder Posted August 28, 2011 Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 Why is the topic title Dark Knight, when the card title is Black Knight?Make more cards, practice is the only way to get better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoaringSilence0 Posted August 28, 2011 Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 This card is simply bad... 2/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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