tripod09 Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 "Chaos Command Magician" + "D.D. Warrior Lady"While you control this card in Face-up Defense position you take 500 points of damage per turn during your End Phase.If your Life Points are under 1000, this effect does not activate. When this card is sent to the Graveyard choose one of the following Effects:*Gain Life Points equal to double the amount of Life Points lost to this cards' Effect.*Inflict damage equal to how ever many Life Points you lost to this cards' Effect. *EDITED* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JIMMYTRON Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 the effect seem ok...the pic rendering is nice...really good for a new member...a composite score of: 7/10i cant really help with the OCG fix though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 First part of the effect doesn't make sense. You need to specify when that effect takes place (for example, during the End Phase). Otherwise, it sounds like the effect just repeats until it kills you. Otherwise is quite good - pic is great and so is the holo. She looks scary. For a new member this is awesome. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tripod09 Posted December 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 First part of the effect doesn't make sense. You need to specify when that effect takes place (for example' date=' during the End Phase). Otherwise, it sounds like the effect just repeats until it kills you. Otherwise is quite good - pic is great and so is the holo. She looks scary. For a new member this is awesome. 8/10.[/quote'] Thank you !! Hey if I improve the OCG where do I post it? Here or in a new post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 Edit your original post with the fixed OCG, then reply saying that it's edited. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tripod09 Posted December 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 Edit your original post with the fixed OCG' date=' then reply saying that it's edited.[/quote'] Can you tell me if I did it right please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 until your life points become 1000 should be a separate sentence: If your Life Points are under 1000, this effect does not activate. Other than that, is fine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 that's one creepy looking DD lady pic you got there the OCG corrections have already been made, and for someone new the OCG is still relatively good to start off 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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