JIMMYTRON Posted December 7, 2009 Report Share Posted December 7, 2009 as explained in the title...im entering a contest and i need some OCG help to i can ensure my victory...PLEASE RATE THEM ACCORDINGLY!!!(hope u liek) [spoiler=Lore] This card cannot attack during the turn that it is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned. When "Toon World" on the field is destroyed, destroy this card. If "Toon World" is on your side of the field and your opponent does not control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If your opponent has more than 5 cards in his/her hand, this card is destroyed. During your Battle Phase, you can discard 1 card from your hand to decrease the ATK and DEF of a targeted monster by x150 for each card in your hand. [spoiler=Lore] If you draw outside of your Draw Phase, this card is sent to the Graveyard. During your Battle Phase, discard 1 card from your hand to increase the ATK of this card by x200 for each card in your hand. If this card attacks your opponent directly, your opponent randomly discards 1 card from their hand. [spoiler=Lore] When the monster equipped attacks with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of a Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points. If your opponent attacks this card with an ATK that is higher than the ATK or DEF of the equipped monster, destroy the attacking monster after Battle Damage is applied. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted December 7, 2009 Report Share Posted December 7, 2009 OCG's not bad, maybe you should make the first toon deokochi, that would make more sense. Also, there already are toy monsters, though it is probably the smallest archetype there is.I like the second card, just remember, if you discard 1 card for the engine, it doesn't activate the effect of the dwarf.The 3rd card is pretty good. If you want to add more to it though, I would change "When the monster equipped attacks with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of a Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points" to "This card inflicts Piercing damage." Its a lot shorter that way :). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JIMMYTRON Posted December 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 so any1 else wants to tell me wats wrongwith the OCG b4 i go crazy (stone cold crazy)...PLEASE I NEED OCG HELPZ!!11!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 8, 2009 Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 spell effect is a little boring, despite being a balanced one OCG errors have already been pointed out, so I'll rate this 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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