<><LOOK><>...My 3 Card Combo...REFURBISHED!!! please rate accordingly

[JIMMYTRON]

as explained in my last post about the 3 card combo...im entering a contest and i need some OCG help to i can ensure my victory...PLEASE RATE THEM ACCORDINGLY!!!

(hope u liek)

 

[spoiler=Lore] If you draw outside of your Draw Phase, this card is sent to the Graveyard. During your Battle Phase, discard 1 card from your hand to increase the ATK of this card by x200 for each card in your hand. If this card attacks your opponent directly, your opponent randomly discards 1 card from their hand.

 

 

[spoiler=Lore] When the monster equipped attacks with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of a Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points. If your opponent attacks this card with an ATK that is higher than the ATK or DEF of the equipped monster, destroy the attacking monster after Battle Damage is applied.

 

 

EDITED SOMEWHAT...

 

[spoiler=Toon Dekoichi the Battlechanted Locomotive]

[spoiler=Lore] This card cannot attack during the turn that it is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned. When "Toon World" on the field is destroyed, destroy this card. If "Toon World" is on your side of the field and your opponent does not control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If your opponent has more than 5 cards in his/her hand, this card is destroyed. During your Battle Phase, you can discard 1 card from your hand to decrease the ATK and DEF of a targeted monster by x150 for each card in your hand.

 

 

[JIMMYTRON]

so no one has a comment or anything...?

[ragnarok1945]

I think because you posted this before, everyone simply thought you made an identical thread