kingedhorn Posted December 8, 2009 Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 This is my first card and I know it is OP Once Per Turn you may discard 1 card from your hand to either remove 1 monster from your opponent's side of the field and remove it from play or draw one card from your deck. any comments are appreciated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
everlasting Posted December 8, 2009 Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 Well, for a newbie, I've seen worse, however, you're missing a few key elements of the ritual card.1) needs a Ritual Spell to go along with it.2) In the effect, it needs to state that it can only be summoned by said ritual card.3) a less blurry pic wouldn't hurt.4) some OCG, and the ATK/DEF is OP'ed.overall, 7.5/10, and let me know if you ever need help in the future, and welcome to YCM. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingedhorn Posted December 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 Well' date=' for a newbie, I've seen worse, however, you're missing a few key elements of the ritual card.1) needs a Ritual Spell to go along with it.2) In the effect, it needs to state that it can only be summoned by said ritual card.3) a less blurry pic wouldn't hurt.4) some OCG, and the ATK/DEF is OP'ed.overall, 7.5/10, and let me know if you ever need help in the future, and welcome to YCM.[/quote'] I see, I haven't made the ritual card yet so when i do I'll alter it. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tunerwizard Posted December 8, 2009 Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 Hey you stole my sig!Its good for a beginnertry clicking on images to see if there are larger versions of the picture(better quality) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted December 8, 2009 Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 Fix:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "xxxxxx". Once per turn you can discard 1 card from your hand to destroy 1 monster your opponent controls or to draw 1 card. It bit OPed since it has high ATK and once per turn you can destroy a card. Well lower the ATK and DEF and it'll be balanced enough or give it a drawback. 7/10and welcome :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 8, 2009 Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 I don't see the ritual spell card for this the atk/def is ok since it's a lv10, but the effect (after you say it can only be summoned via the ritual spell) is boring 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingedhorn Posted December 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 Ok here is a new version with the ritual card. I lowered the level, attack and defense, and fixed the image Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 8, 2009 Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 that's good to hear, but you still have to put up the ritual spell card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingedhorn Posted December 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 Ok here it is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 8, 2009 Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 ok then that'll make it a little better, I'll raise the rate to 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Guardian Posted December 8, 2009 Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 nice fix to the card if i havnt seen it before i would be very impressed by the picture Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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