First Deck Attempt : Quantum [10/??]

[Katsuun]

First time user of the site, so I decided to post my first few cards and see if I get any advice or feedback.

 

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Quantum Physics, where the Universe begins to defy common sense and become capable of all sorts of wonderous things. Within this world, there are creatures beyond the knowing of worldy creatures, who control this domain and all the unsusual effects that it can produce. The Quantum Archetype and most associated creatures are relatively weak, and rely on special effects and spells to bypass, weakne, or shut down enemy monsters while chipping at the opponents life.

 

 

[spoiler=Monsters][align=center]Monster Cards:

 

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[spoiler=Spells][align=center]Spell Cards:

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The ideas are not even close to being fleshed out as of yet, so again, advice will be appreciated. Also, can somebody tell me how to place my cards into spoilers so they wont take up so much space? Thanks in advance.

 

All pictures pulled from Photobucket and on this account: Source

 

EDIT: New cards, edited Entanglement.[/b]

[Katsuun]

First time user of the site, so I decided to post my first few cards and see if I get any advice or feedback.

 

[spoiler=Background and Theme]

Quantum Physics, where the Universe begins to defy common sense and become capable of all sorts of wonderous things. Within this world, there are creatures beyond the knowing of worldy creatures, who control this domain and all the unsusual effects that it can produce. The Quantum Archetype and most associated creatures are relatively weak, and rely on special effects and spells to bypass, weakne, or shut down enemy monsters while chipping at the opponents life.

 

 

[spoiler=Monsters][align=center]Monster Cards:

 

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[spoiler=Spells][align=center]Spell Cards:

[/align]

 

 

The ideas are not even close to being fleshed out as of yet, so again, advice will be appreciated. Also, can somebody tell me how to place my cards into spoilers so they wont take up so much space? Thanks in advance.

 

All pictures pulled from Photobucket and on this account: Source

 

EDIT: New cards, edited Entanglement.[/b]

[ragnarok1945]

for your first cards, the OCG isn't bad at all (yes there's still some minor errors, but you can use the OCG thread on that)

 

your first two spell cards are slightly OPed though, give them drawbacks

 

8/10

[ragnarok1945]

for your first cards, the OCG isn't bad at all (yes there's still some minor errors, but you can use the OCG thread on that)

 

your first two spell cards are slightly OPed though, give them drawbacks

 

8/10

[Jazin Kay]

Not quite sure what Protoss have to do with this, but you know your science.

 

This is the GOOD science, right here. This is where sheet gets WEIRD.

[Jazin Kay]

Not quite sure what Protoss have to do with this, but you know your science.

 

This is the GOOD science, right here. This is where sheet gets WEIRD.

[Katsuun]

A few new cards added. Updated Entanglement. Lacking good pictures, so I might drop this if I can't find any more, or better sources.