My first card.

[Why do i even bother.]

Hi i just joined earlier today and i read over the OCG help thread and the questions and help thread so i could learn how to post cards.....anyways here is my card....hope i did good

 

effect:

This card can not be Normal Summoned or set. This card can not be special summoned except by Tributing 2 LIGHT type monsters. As long as this card remains face up on the field whenever your opponent activates a DARK type monsters effect flip a coin, if heads the effect is negated and your opponent takes 500 damage to their Life Points, if tails you lose 500 Life Points.

[GenerationX]

Hevanly Dragon ===> Heavenly Dragon or Heaven Dragon

 

7/10

[Why do i even bother.]

thanks for the help :D

[Vailan]

Card name: Heavenly Dragon.

OCG:

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 2 LIGHT Attribute Monsters from your side of the field. As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, you can toss a coin each time your opponent activates a DARK Attribute Monster's effect. If Heads: negate the effect and inflict 500 points of Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points. If Tails: Decrease your own Life Points by 500."

 

Seems well-balanced. Pic is overused, but nice.

7,5/10

[Why do i even bother.]

thanks

[ragnarok1945]

very good picture, even though it's overused

 

OCG correction is already up, though Bengal should have said 2 LIGHT monsters in the 2nd sentence, not 2 LIGHT attribute monsters

 

7.8/10

[Why do i even bother.]

thanks.