NeriesUmbra Posted December 9, 2009 Report Share Posted December 9, 2009 [align=center]The only burn set I have ever made what do you think. [spoiler=Monsters] effect When this card is flipped face-up you can add one spell card from your Graveyard that deals effect damage to your hand. When this card is destroyed as a resolt of battle you can Special Summon 1 "Fire Alchemist" in face down defence position from your Hand or Deck. effect At your Standby Phase you can pay 300 Life Points. Send this face up card to the Graveyard to Special Summon from your Hand or Deck 1 "Flameguard Angel LV4" in ATK posistion. effect During your End Phase you may pay 600 life points. Send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon from your Hand or Deck 1 "Flameguard Angel LV8" in ATK position. You may discard 1 monster to inflict damage equal to half the discarded monsters ATK to you and your Opponent . effect This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Flameguard Angel LV4". You may discard 1 monster to inflict damage to you and your opponent equal to 400X the dicarded monsters Level. effect You can tribute 1 monster with 500 ATK or less to destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on the field. effect You can discard this card to add 1 "Land of Fire" or 1 "Fire angel LV1" to your hand from your deck. effect During your Standby Phase deal damage to you and your opponent equal to 200x the number of standby Phases this card has been face up on the field for. effect Once per turn you can Special Summon 1 "Flameguard" monster from your hand with 500 ATK or less. When this card is removed from the field add 1 "Flameguard" monster from your deck with 500 ATK or less to your hand. effect When this card is Summoned you can Special Summon as many "Fire" monsters as posible with 500 ATK or less from your Graveyard to your side of the field. As long as this card is face up on the field your opponent cannot select another monster as an attack target. effect Once per turn you can deal damage to you and your opponent equal to the number of cards on the field x100. If this card is destroyed as a resolt of an effect you can add 1 "Fire" monster with 500 ATK or less from your deck to your hand. effect You can tribute this card to destroy 1 monster on the field. If this card is sent to the Graveyard exept by it's own effect deal 500 damage to your opponent. effect This card cannot be destroyed by a battle involving a monster with 1900 ATK or more. Once per turn you can deal 500 damage to you and your opponent. effect You can send out of play 1 Spell card that has an effect that deals effect damage from your Graveyard to activate it's effect. effect This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 Pyro monsters with 500 ATK or less on your side of the field. When this card is Summoned destroy all other monsters on the field and deal damage equal to 500x the number of monsters destroyed this turn to you and your opponent. effect Once per turn you can send out of play 1 monster from your Graveyard to Normal Summon 1 Pyro type monster with 500 ATK or less from your deck. effect Once per turn you can change this card to defence position to send out of play 1 monster from your Graveyard to deal 1000 damage to you and your opponent. effect This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Crowning Flame". Once per turn you can Summon 1 Pyro type monster from your Deck. As long as this card is face up on the field any effect that would do effect damage to you is negated and you gain life points by the same amount that would have been dealt as damage instead. effect This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card is used for the synchro Summon of a FIRE monster you and your opponent take 1000 damage. effect You can discard this card to send out of play 1 "Flameguard King " from you Hand or Deck. effect As long as this card is face up on the field all effects that would deal damage deal twice as much. As long as you control another face up "Flameguard" monster this card cannot be selected as an attack target. [spoiler=Spells] effect When an effect deals damage to your Life Points raise the ATK of all "Flameguard" monsters by 500. effect Inflict to you and your opponent damage equal to 300x the number of cards in your graveyard that have an effect that deals effect damage. effect During each players End Phase destroy all monsters that were Summoned this turn and inflict damage to each player equal to 200x the combined level of all monsters destroyed by this card's effect this turn. effect This card can only be equiped to FIRE monster with 500 ATK or less. The equipd monster gains 2000 ATK. If this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard deal 500 damage to you and your opponent. effect You can only activate this card when a Monster would be Special Summoned from the Graveyard. Send out of play all monsters on the field and in each players Graveyard then deal damage equal to 200x the number of monsters sent out of play by this cards effect to you and your opponent. effect When a monster is Summoned it is switched to defence position or the controller of that monster takes 500 damage. effect You can tribute 1 "Flameguard" monster to Special Summon 1 "Flameguard king" From out of play to your side of the field. effect 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersIf this card destroys a monster by battle deal 1000 damage to you and your opponent. If this card is destroyed you can remove from play 2 FIRE monsters from your Graveyard to Special Summon this card during your next Standby phase. If this card is Summoned by it's own effect deal 200 damage to you and your opponent for every FIRE monster you have in your Graveyard. effect Remove from play 2 Pyro type monsters from the Graveyard to destroy all Spell cards on the field then deal 500 damage for each card destroyed to you and your opponent. [spoiler=trap] effect Once per turn if a "Flameguard" monster would be destroyed by battle it is not. effect When an effect deals damage to you raise your life points by the same amount instead. effect This card can only be activated if your Life Points are 1000 or lower. You and your opponent draw cards from there Deck until they draw a monster. Then each player takes damage equal to 300x the amount of cards drawn by there opponent by this cards effect. Then send all drawn cards, apart from the monster, to the Graveyard. effect When a "Flameguard" monster you control is destroyed you can summon from your Hand or Deck 1 "Flameguard" monster level 4 or bellow. effect When a monster is Summoned it looses 500 ATK and this card gains an Inferno Counter. You can tribute this card to deal damage to you and your opponent equal to 500x the number of Inferno Counters on this card. effect As long as this card remains face up on the field whenever your opponent declare an attack you select the attack target. If this card is destroyed by your opponents card effect you and your opponent take 1000 damage. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted December 9, 2009 Report Share Posted December 9, 2009 Needs some OCG work. I like the level series, the pics tie together nicely. When you say "Fire," this means that it has fire in its name. If you want it to be the attribute, say FIRE. If you mean it to be an archetype, then try to find a better name than fire. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted December 9, 2009 Report Share Posted December 9, 2009 OCG needs work, really. But errors like may=can deck=Deck. Most part of the effects are way too simple and not creative. But don't look OP'd or UP'd. I'm not expert on this. The pics are great, I loved the LV Angels. They are really amazing (8 - Fire Pixel, could have a Background. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiny_mike Posted December 9, 2009 Report Share Posted December 9, 2009 nice cards 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted December 9, 2009 Report Share Posted December 9, 2009 You should try finding Pics that aren't Anime girls. xD I know Deviantart is soaking in them, but all throughout your work, they are everywhere rofl. Like Sepheran said, if this is going to be an Archtype, make it more than simply "Fire." OCG is flawed. :-/ 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted December 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2009 ty for feed back lol and what's wrong with anime girls lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted December 9, 2009 Report Share Posted December 9, 2009 what's wrong with anime girls rofl. welcome to my sig. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted December 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2009 WTF?? what the hell does that mean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted December 9, 2009 Report Share Posted December 9, 2009 look at my signature. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 10, 2009 Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 Fire Angel lv8 should only be special summoned via lv6's effect, not lv4's effect change of pain and fire veil have bland effects, give them each another one plus it should be FIRE, not Fire 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted December 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 it should be "Fire" since it's an archetype. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted December 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted December 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted December 11, 2009 Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 you really shouldn't bump this often. 24 hours w/o a comment, then bump, k? let people on the forums read the newer threads. no biggie, tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted December 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 bump............rofl I'm just impatient lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted December 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 bump added 7 more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted December 11, 2009 Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 ocg errors but no one likes fixes so here goes my review... i'm not a real fan of the burn thing...i rather prefer inflict battle damage to my opponent, but that's only me. since i know, this is an archtype, the cards will supposedly work with each other perfectly.. 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 11, 2009 Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 good to see more burn effects none of the OCG needs fixing, so I'll rate them 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted December 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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NeriesUmbra Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 added 2 more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Dark Lightning Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 OCG needs fixing. 8.9/10 But I like them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted December 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 ty for that and I have added 2 more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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