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[~Wright~]

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[spoiler=Lore]1 Warrior Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Warrior monsters

When this card is Summoned, remove from play 1 card your opponent controls or add 1 Level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your Deck to your hand. This card inflicts Piercing damage. Once per turn, by discarding 1 Spell Card, add 1 Equip Spell Card from your Deck to your hand. You cannot activate it this turn, and you cannot activate this effect during the turn this card was Summoned. You can Tribute 2 Warrior-Type monsters you control to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard.

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[ragnarok1945]

there's some minor OCG errors, but I get the gist of what you're saying. Use the OCG thread to help you on that

 

it's just lacking a slight drawback, too OPed right now even for Synchro standards

 

8.5/10

[Aero~]

What do you mean by "Piercing Damamge"?

[Arcadiz]

What do you mean by "Piercing Damamge"?

 

->During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points.

 

Card is too OP in my opinion.

 

8/10

[Brittle Ice]

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
When this card is Summoned, remove from play 1 card your opponent controls and add 1 Level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your Deck to your hand. This card inflicts Piercing damage. Once per turn, by discarding 1 Spell Card, add 1 Equip Spell Card from your Deck to your hand. You cannot activate this effect during the turn this card was Summoned. You can Tribute 2 Warrior-Type monsters you control to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard.

 

Unnecessarily long name, OK image.

The card is OP'd. Very OP'd.

As Ragnarok put it, add a drawback or remove some part of the effect.

 

7 / 10

[Killey]

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

When this card is Special Summoned' date=' remove from play 1 card your opponent controls, [b']then[/b] add 1 Level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your Deck to your hand. This card inflicts piercing damage. Once per turn, you can discard 1 Spell Card to select add 1 Equip Spell Card from your Deck to your hand. The selected card cannot be played this turn. You can Tribute 2 Warrior-Type monsters to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard.

 

I've corrected some of the OCG though I'm a little iffy on the 2nd half where I've opted to adjust the effect to "select and add" then state the selected card can't be played that turn. You may be able to get away with your current wording. I'm opting to leave piercing damage alone as it was used on a Cyber Dark monster (even though that's the only card that uses that wording) as the full written effect would make the wording on this card too long.

 

I don't think this card is broken it has some abuses and it definitely has too many good effects. I think the RFG effect and then tutoring a warrior should only occur when it is Synchro Summoned. I think that change alone would make this card balanced. If you want to go a bit further you can even make the synchro requirements a tuner and a warrior non-tuner.

 

In terms of how it impacts the current metagame with it's current wording and effect it would be added to everyone's extra deck just for the ability to RFG an immediate threat.

 

Rating:

7/10

-Great picture.

-A tad overpowered with that RFG effect triggering when its Special Summoned.

-It's not ground breaking to the metagame but it would definitely see play and be main decked for that ability to get rid of an immediate threat.

-Minor OCG errors.

[ragnarok1945]

What do you mean by "Piercing Damamge"?

 

I'm sure it was meant to say Piercing Damage

[~Wright~]

Changes made.

[ragnarok1945]

now everything looks good enough for me to raise the rate to 9/10