Antiswoth Posted December 10, 2009 Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 take a look at this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted December 10, 2009 Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 Seems... Decent for a newbie.+ Pic isn't the best I've ever seen, but it works well. I would try to erase the text, tho.- Your OCG isn't very good. You must capitalizate some words, too. I suggest you check out the OCG Thread.+ Teh name is good. Decent and I think it fits with teh pic.- Seems OP'd to me... Your opponent takes 500 Damage Points for each 5 or higher Level monster summoned. And these monsters lose much ATK. I would remove the last effect.6.5/10 - As I said, decent for a newbie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted December 11, 2009 Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 some OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crusard Posted December 11, 2009 Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PyroWildcat Posted December 11, 2009 Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 I really shouldn't just go right out and give you this, but here's a corrected version of the card's effect: "Deal 500 damage to your opponent for each face-up monster they control with a Level of 5 or higher. Reduce the ATK of all face-up monsters your opponent controls with a Level of 5 or higher by an amount equal to the damage dealt to your opponent by this card's effect." Fix that, then either erase or crop out the "Bleach" text in the picture, and this card should look pretty good. Oh, and this trap doesn't seem like it needs to be Continuous, so you should probably take that off as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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