kliffi Posted December 10, 2009 Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 Heyas! I felt I should make some LV monsters, because they deserve it :] [align=center][spoiler=Paradax the Angel Automaton][spoiler=LV4][spoiler=Lore]When this card is sent to the Graveyard by battle, you can Special Summon 2 "Scrap Tokens" (Machine-Type/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 100/DEF 100) to your side of the field in Defense Position. These Tokens cannot be Tributed for a Tribute Summon or Set. If this card is equipped with an Equip Spell Card during your End Phase, you can send this face-up card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Paradax the Angel Automaton LV6" from your hand or Deck. [spoiler=LV6][spoiler=Lore]If this card was Special Summoned by the effect of "Paradax the Angel Automaton LV4", you can select 1 Equip Spell Card in your Graveyard and equip it to this card. If this card attacks a face-down Defense Position monster, and the attack target's DEF is higher than this card's ATK, you can negate the attack, select another 1 of your opponent's monsters, and attack it. During the End Phase of a turn that this card destroyed a monster by battle, by sending this card to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Paradax the Angel Automaton LV8" from your hand or Deck. [spoiler=LV8][spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Paradax the Angel Automaton LV6." When this card attacks, place 1 Heroism Counter on a face-up monster on your side of the field except this card. Decrease the ATK and DEF of all monsters on the field with Heroism Counters on them by 100 per counter. Increase your Life Points by 100 for every Heroism Counter on the field during each of your Standby Phases. [spoiler=Xoan the Demon Automaton][spoiler=LV4][spoiler=Lore]Once per turn, during your End Phase, place 1 Upgrade Counter on this card (max. 3) and flip a coin. If the result is heads, increase the ATK and decrease the DEF of this card by 200. If the result is tails, decrease the ATK and increase the DEF of this card by 200. If this card has 3 Upgrade Counters on it during your End Phase, you can send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Xoan the Demon Automaton LV5" from your hand or Deck. [spoiler=LV6][spoiler=Lore]If this card was Special Summoned by the effect of "Xoan the Demon Automaton LV3", this card is not affected by Trap Cards. When this card attacks, flip a coin. If the result is heads, increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 100. If the result is tails, decrease the ATK and DEF of this card by 100. During the End Phase of a turn that this card destroyed a monster by battle, by sending this card to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Xoan the Demon Automaton LV7" from your hand or Deck. [spoiler=LV8][spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Xoan the Demon Automaton LV5." When this card attacks, flip a coin. If the result is heads, increase the ATK of this card by 300 until the end of the Damage Step. If the result is tails, decrease the ATK of this card by 300 until the end of the Damage Step. When this card is attacked, flip a coin. If the result is heads, the attacking monster is destroyed at the end of the Damage Step. If the result is tails, increase the ATK of the attacking monster by 300. [spoiler=How to Pronounce the Names]Paradax - (pair-uh-daks)Xoan - (zo-en OR zo-in)[/align] - - - Rate/Comment! P.S. I might need help with OCG, I have a feeling there are a few errors. Kliffi out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted December 10, 2009 Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 Effects are totally solid and original. Pics are fantastic and flow very well. They really seem as if they were made for the cards. Is this original artwork? Because then I would have to raise your score, and you're already 10/10. Hrmmm... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted December 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 lol Thanks!! The aren't isn't mine (pfft I wish!), but they do tie together. Thanks! I hope the effects are definite enough. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted December 10, 2009 Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 PICs fit each other well. Some OCG erros...but minor ones Original effects Nice pics 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted December 10, 2009 Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 The effects are great. The OCG is Solid and the Grammar and Spelling is good. Minor errors thought not very big. I like the pics and how the flow from each monster. I really like the way you are going here. Great job :D ~9/10~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted December 10, 2009 Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 great cards, solid OCG and interesting effects. the pics combined very good. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xzMasteRzx Posted December 10, 2009 Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 Nice, nice...Score: 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted December 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 Thanks. Could someone point out my OCG errors please? :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted December 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 Anyone? lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 11, 2009 Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 the only real flaw here is that the lv7 and 8 monsters can be summoned without the effect of lv5 and 6, and the only cost is they don't get an atk/def boost It makes them a little OPed. Change it so that they can only be special summoned by lv5 and 6 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted December 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 Fixed :) That works, thanks for the tip. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted December 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 I've decided to make Xoan LV4/LV6/LV8 cuz that should work out better with ratios etc. nothing huge, though. Still hoping for the OCG fixes, if any are needed :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted December 11, 2009 Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 [intros...] LV again??? Down to the review, The first LV cards are OP'ed. They're basically a +2, I guess, please check with your math k? The second is balanced that I like them. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted December 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 There we go. That should be balanced. I changed Paradax LV6's ability altogether, and nerfed LV8's ability. Do I need to fix LV4's effect? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted December 11, 2009 Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 Yep, actually, I only read Level4's effect... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nightmare drake Posted December 11, 2009 Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 good cards9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted December 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 Archelaus, I fixed the 1st one's effect to be more like dandylion. that should balance out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted December 11, 2009 Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 Since I can't help myself but fix your OCG, I will. FIX: When this card is sent to the Graveyard aby battle, you can Special Summon 2 "Scrap Tokens" (Machine-Type/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 100/DEF 100) to your side of the field in Defense Position. These Tokens cannot be Tributed for a Tribute Summon or Set. If this card is equipped with an Equip Spell Card during your End Phase, you can send this face-up card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Paradax the Angel Automaton LV6" from your hand or Deck. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted December 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 Fixed. Thanks, btw. I really like these cards: These pics were tough to dig up lol I like the outcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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