Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted December 11, 2009 Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 This is my first (unfinished) set of cards. Please don't be too harsh. [spoiler=cards][spoiler=Lore]You can return 1 “Mirage” monster on your side of the field to your hand to Special Summon this card. Spell and Trap Cards cannot be activated during the turn this card is Special Summoned. This card cannot be removed from the field by the effect of a “Mirage” card during the turn this card is Special Summoned. [spoiler=Lore]When this card is removed from the field by the effect of a “Mirage” card, you can destroy 1 card on the field. [spoiler=Lore]When your opponent declares an attack, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. If this card is removed from the field by the effect of a “Mirage” card, return this card to your Deck. This card returns to your Deck during the End Phase. [spoiler=ultimate rare][spoiler=Lore]When your opponent selects a “Mirage” monster as an attack target, you can change the “Mirage” monster’s attack to 2300. After the damage step, return the “Mirage” monster to your hand and Special Summon this card. This card cannot be removed from the field by the effect of a “Mirage” monster during the turn this card is special summoned. [spoiler=Lore]When your opponent selects a “Mirage” monster as an attack target, you can return the “Mirage” monster to your hand and destroy the attacking monster. Then Special Summon this card from your hand. Destroy this card during the End Phase of the next turn. This card cannot be removed from the field by the effect of a “Mirage” card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 11, 2009 Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 cards 3 and 4 have overused pics, you also posted the 4th card twice the OCG is also very good for someone new, and though there's some short effects, they're suited for the low levels 8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted December 11, 2009 Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 Second pic is blurry.Third pic is awesome :D Effects are good. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted December 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 BUmp. New card and new pics. How do I tell if a pic is overused? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 12, 2009 Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 the last effect contradicts one of your effects in the text you said Nemesis is destroyed during the end phase of the next turn, which would be by its own effect, but then you said it can't be removed from the field by the effect of a Mirage card, which would have included itself as well 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sdg y reb Posted December 12, 2009 Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 incredible, are these your first card? 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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