S-Cry-Ed

[redeyelion]

[PyroWildcat]

Well, first of, the pics are very badly pixellated, the first one needs a background, and the second one looks kinda stretched. I highly recommend looking for better pics.

 

Also, I took the liberty of rewriting the effects to better fit the OCG:

 

Kazuma the ShellBullet

When this monster destroys a monster by Battle, increase this monster's ATK by 200.

 

Kazuma Rage

Negate the activation of a Trap Card and destroy it. When this card is activated, all face-up monsters on the field with "ShellBullet" in their name increase their ATK by 200.

 

 

The monster's effect seems kinda standard and is a little unimaginative. The Trap is a little more interesting, but if the ATK bonus only works on one specific monster, said bonus should probably be a little higher.

 

Basically, you do need some work, but if you work on following OCG and finding better pictures, I'm sure you can do just fine.

[pegarider]

Good cards, but still needs to fix the OCG, though.

 

7/10

[Guest Neo Fusion]

OCG, spelling

[redeyelion]

thanks for the advice

[Yankee]

lolsamepiclol

 

The ocg is not good at all, wich, with being a new member, is to be expected.

I only wish they where more original.

 

Good overall for a brand new member however ^_\\\