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[mysticryan]

Please rate these cards. I worked a long time on the effects. They are based off the anime show Rozen Maiden.

 

Every turn this card is on the field your opponent gets 1 Strawberry Token (Atk-100, Def-100, Effect-This monster cannot be destroyed unless you sacrafice 500 LP and remove from play the top card of your deck.) While this monster is in defense position all monsters on the field cannot be used for tribute, ritual, fusion, or synchro summoning.

 

Every turn you can sacrafice 200 LP to special summon 1 Cloud Token (Atk-0, Def-0, Effect-This monster cancels out all effects that effect this token. When this token is used for tribute summoning it can be used as 2 tributes.) to your side of the field. If this monster is the only one on your side of the field, then all monsters on the field with 3 or more stars are removed from play.

 

Every other turn you can place 1 Slice Token (Atk-2000, Def-2000, Effect-Every standby phase you gain 500 LP for every Slice Token in your graveyard.) in your graveyard. This monster can attack your opponent's LP directly. When Rozen Maiden-Drip, the Doll of Water is on the field this card gains 600 attack points for every Slice Token in your graveyard.

 

Every turn you can pay 300 LP to special summon 1 Droplet Token (Atk-2000, Def-2000, Effect-Every turn you lose 200 LP for every Droplet Token in your graveyard.) to your opponent's graveyard. This monster cannot attack your opponent's LP directly. If the monster Rozen Maiden-Snip, the Doll of Earth is on the field then you gain 400 attack points for every Droplet Token in your opponent's graveyard.

 

Every turn you can pay 200 LP to create as many Rose Tokens (Atk-800, Def-800, Effect-This monster cannot be destroyed in battle.) in your graveyard as possible. This card gains 100 attack and defense points for every Rose Token in the game.

 

Every turn you may place 1 Black Feather Token (Atk-0, Def-0, Effect-Once this card is drawn you lose 400 LP and must remove from play 1 card from your field. This monster cannot be summoned.) in your opponent's deck and then they may shuffle. This monster can only be tribute summoned by tributing 2 monsters.

 

Every turn you can create 2 Crystal Tokens (Atk-0, Def-2000, Effect- This monster cannot be destoyed.) and place them anywhere in the game. This monster's attack points increase by 200 for every Crystal Token in the game. Every turn you must pay 100 LP to keep this card on the field.

 

This card can only be special summoned when all "Rozen Maiden" monsters (besides this one) have been removed from your deck. This monster's attack and defense are equal to the amount of Tokens that all of the "Rozen Maiden" monsters have produced times 1000. You can have an infinite amount of monsters on the field when this card is summoned. When this card is summoned all "Rozen Maiden" monsters are summoned to your side of the field. Once per turn you can create 1 Divine Token (Atk-0, Def-0, Effect-as long as this monster is removed from play and Rozen Maiden-Angelica, the Goddess Doll is on the field, you gain 1000 LP per turn.) and remove it from play. Whenever you gain LP your opponent loses 100 LP and 1 card from their hand is removed from play.

 

And the field spell card.

When this card is on the field you may special summon 1 "Rozen Maiden" monster from your deck or hand to the field. All "Rozen Maiden" monsters gain 200 attack for every token they create. Once this card is activated, the only way it can be destroyed is by taking half of your LP, add them to your opponent's and remove from play 2 "Rozen Maiden" monsters from your graveyard.

[PyroWildcat]

Couple OCG things that should be mentioned:

 

token summoning goes ("Type"-Type/ATTRIBUTE/Level X/ATK X00/DEF X00)

If a Token has its own effect, just include it in the effect of the card that summons it.

Instead of "create" or "place", all(or at least most) Tokens are Special Summoned

attack points/attack = ATK

defense points/defense = DEF

Defense Position/Attack Position are capitalized

every = each

on your side of the field = you control

on your opponent's side of the field = your opponent controls

side of the field = field

3 or more stars = a Level of 3 or higher

LP = Life Points(and for Life Points, use "pay" instead of sacrifice)

When referencing a specific monsters name, the name has to be in quotation marks.

Special, Tribute, Ritual, Fusion, and Synchro Summoning are all capitalized

 

I've never watched that particular anime, so I can't really comment on how well the cards fit the characters. The pictures look good, though some people may be turned off by the pictures for Rose and Alice having plain white backgrounds.

 

Also, I haven't really been keeping very close track of the card game's rules, but I don't think that tokens can be placed in the graveyards or in player's decks. I could be wrong, though; if I am, disregard this. Otherwise, the effects are quite unique and clever. Nice work!

[pegarider]

Well, I think some of the OCG must be fixed...

 

Anyways the effects are good 'n 'da picture is nice.

 

8/10

[Guest Neo Fusion]

these aight for a new member, but few things: OCG, OPed, and u shud knw that tokens dont go to the Graveyard, cuz theyr not actual monsters

the OCG il tell u is LP shud be Life Points and atk and def shud be ATK and DEF

[Danny19297]

some OCG but thats it!, nice cards

8.5/10