Bloodrun Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 I recently took a poll, i guess you could say, and the outcome, was tht i make more cards, and then base a fan fic off of them, so lol as said in the tittle of this thread, the cards will be called Forsaken Love, and are advertised, by my banner, which was made by God Kak. So please look through the cards and tell me hat you think. and for those of you who have recieved my criticism on your cards. It is now your turn to do your owrst! hehehe >.< =)As you read.... If you read through the card effects, you will notice that i have re introduced, and less widely known tactic called Defensive Strike. Defensive Strike allows your monster to attack while they are in Defense Position, not many of the koonami cards actually has this effect, in fact, i only know of one and that is "Total Defense Shogun". so yeah, I wanted to make up/ re-new a new tactic, like the Turn Summon, and what not lol 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 Very Very Nice Job Bud. 10/10. The only thing I can say is that the grammar is good. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 9, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 Very Very Nice Job Bud. 10/10. The only thing I can say is that the grammar is good. lol lol only the grammar is good? so does that mean that the rest of the cards are bad?! 8) :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 They're okay. Good OCG, really good... Pictures... could be better sometimes, fair enough anyways. GOR.... what about GOR..... actually good balanced, good job :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 What I meant was a joke blood. You get on me with my grammar. but the cards are great. like before. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 9, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 They're okay. Good OCG' date=' really good... Pictures... could be better sometimes, fair enough anyways. GOR.... what about GOR..... actually good balanced, good job :D[/quote'] lol, thanx =) and yankee i know it was a joke, but the way you said it, it sounded wierd lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 the pics and grammer is good 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 9, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 the pics and grammer is good 10/10 ty =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda_Cosgrove14 Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 10/10 these are FLIPPING AMAZING!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 9, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 10/10 these are FLIPPING AMAZING!!!!! lol hehe thanks! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 nice-but how do you pronounce these?! lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 9, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 nice-but how do you pronounce these?! lol oh you mean these ones?:Nau'ts'ity'i = (now-tea-eaty-a) I'tcts'ity'i = (e-tis-eaty-a) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2007 Knock Knockwho's there?boo whoboo who, who?boo who you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flyingdagger8 Posted December 10, 2007 Report Share Posted December 10, 2007 Nice cards. I really like the image for I'tcts'ity'i, but the OCG is kinda weird because you say, "this card gains the following effect,"...IDK maybe it is just me and is it supposed to be "Wolds Below-SacoBi" or "Worlds Below-SacoBi" I think you spelled "worlds" incorrectly. Worlds Below-Cybernetic End seems to be overpowered. Imagine if you had a deck that had cards like "Mystical Elf" and "Millenium Shield" or "Labyrinth Wall?" But anyways good cards. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 10, 2007 Report Share Posted December 10, 2007 The pictures are fair, but your grammar is I think more than perfect. You should fix that. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2007 Nice cards. I really like the image for I'tcts'ity'i' date=' but the OCG is kinda weird because you say, "this card gains the following effect,"...IDK maybe it is just me and is it supposed to be "Wolds Below-SacoBi" or "Worlds Below-SacoBi" I think you spelled "worlds" incorrectly. Worlds Below-Cybernetic End seems to be overpowered. Imagine if you had a deck that had cards like "Mystical Elf" and "Millenium Shield" or "Labyrinth Wall?" But anyways good cards. 8/10[/quote'] lol i might have spelled it wrong lol, um, but you see, lol not everyone has those cards you know what i mean? the reason i brought back the Defense Strike technique, is because now everyone is into offense, not defense lol =) but i thank you for you comment 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2007 The pictures are fair' date=' but your grammar is I think more than perfect. You should fix that. =D[/quote'] lol um, i cant believe im going to correct this but um, dont you mean my grammar is less then perfect, becuase if its more than perfect, how could i fix it lol =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flyingdagger8 Posted December 10, 2007 Report Share Posted December 10, 2007 NP....and yeah I know what you mean because I used to have a mainly defensive deck with Mystical Elf and Spirit of the Harp, but then I changed it to become a whole lot more offensive....again very good cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2007 NP....and yeah I know what you mean because I used to have a mainly defensive deck with Mystical Elf and Spirit of the Harp' date=' but then I changed it to become a whole lot more offensive....again very good cards.[/quote'] lol, thank you =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aztex Posted December 10, 2007 Report Share Posted December 10, 2007 Some OCG mistakes. But your cards are still as awesome as you are! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2007 Some OCG mistakes. But your cards are still as awesome as you are! 9/10 lol, where do you see OCG mistakes? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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