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this card can be a bit OP'ed depending on the monsters used for the fusion summon, this card can NOT be special summoned from the graveyard but I assume that people already knew that, as its a fusion monster.

 

 

 

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again can be a bit OP'ed, has the same effect as XYZ dragon cannon, and obviously you will need a card in your hand to activate its effect which can be used to clear the field.

 

 

 

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another synchro monster, that can be used to alter the DARK monsters in your graveyard, perfect for a DAD deck.

it has NO restrictions involving the DARK monsters attack points or level so can be used to get dark armed dragon or any powerful DARK monster out of your graveyard and into your hand

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Evil heroes are already an archetype involving elemental heroes.

 

Darkness vampire is far too easy to summon and has the possibility to be far too powerful all you could have a deck ful of just lvl 8 zombies and fiends and polymerisations etc and you can win with 1 attack.

 

Dragon queen is too easy. everyone would use it in their deck... xyz dragon cannon is difficult to summon thats why its effect is allowed to be so powerful.

 

Dark witch is similarly overpowered, especially for a lvl7 monster with 3000 ATK - and i don't think a card that stengthens a dark armed dragon deck is something any1 wants/needs to see...

 

A few ocg problems, overpowered effects, summoning issues, low quality images, use of existing archetype name, and pretty unimaginative atmo. Sorry but work on these and try again.

 

1/10

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Evil heroes are already an archetype involving elemental heroes.

 

That's the Point' date=' its making new cards for an already existing Archetype, not very rare here.

 

check mine out plz----BEAST CARDS

 

Spam is not okay, please don't do this.

 

As for the cards.......

 

Evil Hero Fusions should have to be fused with Dark Fusion.

 

Darkness Vampire is a copy of Dark Gaia, and the Picture is quite bad.

OCG(=Original Card Grammar) fix:

"The original ATK and DEF of this card is equal to the combined ATK of the Fusion Material Monsters used to Fusion Summon it."

Do you mean that the Attack and Defense of the monster is a Fusion of the Attack only of the Materials?

 

Dragon Queen has a fairly common effect, but the Picture is fantastic. You should also have a specific amount of times you can do this, and a set time during the Turn.

No big errors OCG wise, mainly only Capitalization errors, but a bit OP(=OverPowered)'ed.

 

Dark Witch has, again, a fairly common effect, and the Picture is of quite low quality.

Again no really big OCG errors, only Capitalization again.

 

Overall, these cards are okay for a beginner, but look and feel nothing like a real Evil Hero, besides the fact that they are all Fiends, when they definitely shouldn't be.

 

So, about a 4/10, the other person, TEZZORI, only gave you a bad grade-thingy because he is no longer the new person, and he thinks he can "pick-on" new users like some users did to him.

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What r u on about i've only been here a week, but i do have extensive dueling experience so if i can help people out with a review i will. Nothing about them except the name implies they are anything to do with Evil heroes. You yourself pointed out all the errors so i'm not sure why you were so generous giving a 4/10, there aren't any good points atmo....

 

This is the realistic thread. these cards are unrealistic. Hence i pointed out why so improvements could be made. I certainly don't "pick-on" new users... As for your comment i've only posted 1 card and it got 8/10's. I really was just trying to help. My card is here if you want to review http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-172454.html it's an elemental hero so may help you with your cards.

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