Kotaro Posted December 11, 2009 Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 As I try to go back into card making, I bring you one of my newest cards. Hopefully, this isnt OP and doesnt have any OCG errors in it, I will let you decide that! [align=center] This card can only be activated when a Level 3 or lower Reptile-Type monster has been Special Summoned from your Deck or Graveyard. You can Special Summon 2 "Reptile Tokens" (Reptile-Type/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 300/DEF 0) to your field. The "Reptile Tokens" cannot be used as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon. During your Main Phase 1, by paying 400 Life Points, you can Special Summon 1 "Reptile Token". If you have 4 "Reptile Tokens" on your field during your Main Phase 2, can remove from play a number of Reptile-Type monsters in your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 Reptile-Type monster from your hand or Deck whose Level is up to or equal to the number of monsters you removed from play. All "Reptile Tokens" are destroyed 3 turns after they have been Special Summoned.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 11, 2009 Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 not equal to the amount of monsters you removed from play you must have meant equal to the amount of tokens removed from play (with regards to the reptile tokens) 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted December 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 I actually meant monsters, because then it would only allow you to summon a monster up to level 4. You remove monsters from play and just say you remove 6 monsters, you can special Summon a level 6 monster. But if it makes it balanced, then I will change it to tokens instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 11, 2009 Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 ok then, well in that case you should have said UP TO or equal the # of monsters removed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted December 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 Ok, I changed the last part of that sentence to "up to or equal to the number of monsters you removed from play", although im not sure if the OCG is right. Anymore comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted December 12, 2009 Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 [it's mah afternoon intro...] I see a lizard! or is that a salamander? Down to the review, This card can only be activated when a Level 3 or lower Reptile-Type monster has been Special Summoned from your Deck or Graveyard. *It's a bit hard to activate, if I'm wrong, please tell me.* You can Special Summon 2 "Reptile Tokens" (Reptile-Type/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 300/DEF 0) to your field. The "Reptile Tokens" cannot be used as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon. *The Usual Token Text* During your Main Phase 1, by paying 400 Life Points, you can Special Summon 1 "Reptile Token". *So they multiply..interesting* If you have 4 "Reptile Tokens" on your field during your Main Phase 2, can remove from play a number of Reptile-Type monsters in your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 Reptile-Type monster from your hand or Deck whose Level is up to or equal to the number of monsters you removed from play. *Venom/Alien support? I likey* All "Reptile Tokens" are destroyed 3 turns after they have been Special Summoned. *I saw this coming* It's a solid reptile support card. I think it's really great. 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted December 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 I dont know what it is, I guessed it would be a lizard. I saw the picture and thought I would use it. I thought making it easy to activate might make it OP, so I used a a bit of requirement. Thankyou for your comments and rating. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ihop Posted December 12, 2009 Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 Absolutely brilliant.Possibly slightly broken, but not especially. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted December 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 Thankyou, but why is it broken? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted December 12, 2009 Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 Picture is ok and effect is good although your field may be a bit crowded with tokens 8/10:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 12, 2009 Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 Ok' date=' I changed the last part of that sentence to "up to or equal to the number of monsters you removed from play", although im not sure if the OCG is right. Anymore comments?[/quote'] all right, that makes it better, I'll raise my rate to 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted December 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 Picture is ok and effect is good although your field may be a bit crowded with tokens 8/10:)That is why I made it so that they get destroyed 3 turns after being summoned. Thanks for your comments and rating. Ok' date=' I changed the last part of that sentence to "up to or equal to the number of monsters you removed from play", although im not sure if the OCG is right. Anymore comments?[/quote'] all right, that makes it better, I'll raise my rate to 9.5/10Thankyou ragnorok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 I say bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◎Kaleidoscope Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Blaze=Very happy that you're back in cardmaking. Not your best, but still worthy of 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Hmmm. Alien decks would orgasm rainbows. 7.9/10. I'm hard to impress, but I'd use this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted December 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 Thanks for both your comments, hopefully, I should get better at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted December 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 Bump, need more comments on this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted December 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 1 more bump, if I dont get comments, im letting this go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 Its seems good. Nice for reptiles since they like swarming and special Summoning from deck and grave. Good pic too. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nightmare drake Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 good card9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted December 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 Thanks for your rating and comment sephiran1 and thanks for rating nightmare drake. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted December 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 Last and final bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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