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one seriously powerful dark magician card!!!


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Take a look. please comment. I like to know what people think...

 

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Effect: This monster cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned by discarding from your hand or graveyard one "dark magician", one "dark magician girl", and one "sorceror of black magic". When this card is summoned sucessfuly place 5 "pitch black" counters on this card. By removing one "pitch black" counter from this card, you can negate an opponents monster's attack, or negate the activation of a card effect and destroy the card. When this monster has no "pitch black" counters on it, destroy this card and summon the "dark magician" used as a tribute for the special summon of this monster. If "dark magician" is summoned by this card's effect, you lose 1000 life points.

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This card can only be special summoned by discarding from your hand or graveyard one "dark magician", one "dark magician girl", and one "sorceror of black magic".

 

Since when is discarding from the graveyard possible? You also spelled "Sucessfully" wrong. UP'd and I don't really like the picture or the name. I'd increase the ATK and lose part of the summoning conditions. OCG also has a few errors but I probably can't see all of them.

 

This card can improve. :D 3/10

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OCG FIX:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 1 "Dark Magician", 1 "Dark Magician Girl", and 1 "Sorceror of Dark Magic" from your hand to the Graveyard. When this card is Summoned successfully, place 5 Pitch Black Counters on this card. By removing 1 Pitch Black Counter from this card, you can negate an opponent's attack, or negate the activation of a card's effect and destroy it. When this monster has no Pitch Black Counters on it, destroy this card and Summon 1 "Dark Magician" from your Graveyard. If a "Dark Magician" is Summoned by this card's effect, you lose 1000 Life Points.

 

Increase the ATK to like 3800 or something at least 3000.

 

Well, a lot of OCG errors which I've fixed and effect is just not worth the high Summoning Conditions

Fix OCG and I think you should remove the last 1000 Life Points effect.

For now 3/10 (pic is just "Dark Magician" doing a pose)

And also, name should be "Pitch Black Dark Magician" (capitalized)

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