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[align=center]Chapter 2

 

Sprit Summoning!

 

Jimmy and Johnny were stuck in a small, tight cab with this guy that adopted them. All he did was sit there, not moving, and stareing out the window. Jimmy had liked him from the start but Johnny was way to stubborn to like someone he just met.

"Hey Jimmy." Johnny quietly said so Mr.Nimmo wouldn't hear him."Do really think we should have let this guy adopt us?"

"What are you talking about?" Jimmy said." I asked you if you wanted to get adopted and you said you wantedd to."

"Well I think I was wrong. I mean look at him." Jimmy and Johnny stared at the still man looking out the window."He seems suspicous."

"Well I'm still happy he adopted us." That wasn't really the truth. Jimmy was having seacond thoughts about this. He looked out the window to see what part of town they were in. They weren't anywhere near town. They were in the middle of the desert!

Nimmo finaly said something as sone as Jim looked out the window."Stop the car we're getting out here." The cab driver looked at him funny.

"Are you serious?"

"Yes we are now stop the car!" The man flinched as he slamed the breaks.

The man pushed Jim and John out of the card as he got out."Go!" Nimmo yelled at the man as he floored it. Jim and John stared with open mouths as the car ran away.

"What the face* are you doing?" John screamed at Nimmo."We're stuck here in the middle of nowhere!" Nimmo ignored him he just stood there. Then he bit his thumb causing it to bleed. Then he just stood there with his arms spread apart.

"Hey. Hey! Are you listening to m,"

"Shut up boy! I need to focucs!" Nimmo yelled at him. After he yelled Nimmo started making werid arm motions until his thumb and his hand conected.

"Sprit Summoning!" Nimmo yelled as he slamed his hand on the ground. Then a giant bird, the size of a airplane appered in front of them. Jimmy and Johnny just stared in awe.

"W-what is that thing." They both said at the same time stamered. Nimmo simply looked at them and said.

"Just get on I'll explain everything on the way to the mountains."[/align]

 

Again work in progress

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[align=center]Chapter 2

 

Sprit Summoning!

 

Jimmy and Johnny were stuck in a small' date=' tight cab with this guy that adopted them. All he did was sit there, not moving, and stareing out the window. Jimmy had liked him from the start but Johnny was way to stubborn to like someone he just met.

"Hey Jimmy." Johnny quietly said so Mr.Nimmo wouldn't hear him."Do really think we should have let this guy adopt us?"

"What are you talking about?" Jimmy said." I asked you if you wanted to get adopted and you said you wantedd to."

"Well I think I was wrong. I mean look at him." Jimmy and Johnny stared at the still man looking out the window."He seems suspicous."

"Well I'm still happy he adopted us." That wasn't really the truth. Jimmy was having seacond thoughts about this. He looked out the window to see what part of town they were in. They weren't anywhere near town. They were in the middle of the desert!

Nimmo finaly said something as sone as Jim looked out the window."Stop the car we're getting out here." The cab driver looked at him funny.

"Are you serious?"

"Yes we are now stop the car!" The man flinched as he slamed the breaks.

The man pushed Jim and John out of the card as he got out."Go!" Nimmo yelled at the man as he floored it. Jim and John stared with open mouths as the car ran away.

"What the face* are you doing?" John screamed at Nimmo."We're stuck here in the middle of nowhere!" Nimmo ignored him he just stood there. Then he bit his thumb causing it to bleed. Then he just stood there with his arms spread apart.

"Hey. Hey! Are you listening to m,"

"Shut up boy! I need to focucs!" Nimmo yelled at him. After he yelled Nimmo started making werid arm motions until his thumb and his hand conected.

"Sprit Summoning!" Nimmo yelled as he slamed his hand on the ground. Then a giant bird, the size of a airplane appered in front of them. Jimmy and Johnny just stared in awe.

"W-what is that thing." They both said at the same time stamered. Nimmo simply looked at them and said.

"Just get on I'll explain everything on the way to the mountains."[/align']

 

Again work in progress

 

lol i like how you listened to me =) and i like how the stroy is unfolding! 8) keep it up :o

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[align=center]Chapter 3

 

The Temple of the Sprits

 

Johnny and Jimmy were amazed they were on the back of a giant falcon flying over the mountains. Jimmy still had a troubled mind. He was on the back of a giant falcon that popped out of nowhere due to this old man that seemed to have summoned it. What is going on? Jimmy thought to himself. This falcon the size of a airplane apperes out of nowhere and is taking us somewhere in the mountains. Jimmy looked at Nimmo who was guiding the falcon. And this, this man seems to have brought it here. I don't now what to belive now.

"I didn't think you would beive your eyes over your mind." Nimmo said. Jimmy flinched. Was he reading my mind? "Yes I was." Nimmo confrimed.

"What are you guys talking about?" Johnny said confused. He was to distracted by the giant bird. Johnny has a very short attetion span.

"Wait a minute so you can read minds," Johnny listed. "summon giant birds and your like 58. What are you" Jimmy exclaimed. All that Nimmo did was smirk.

"I'm a sprit warrior." Nimmo said. Jimmy and Johnny just stared at him.

"What's a sprit warrior?" Jimmy asked Nimmo. Nimmo just stared at him.

"You'll find out when we get to the temple." Jimmy and Johnny just looked at each other. What temple was he talking about and what was a sprit warrior. The only thing they could do is wait.

Jimmy and Johnny waited two hours and they still didn't reach the temple. Then they finally heard the words we're here from Nimmo. Jimmy and Johnny looked over the edge of the falcon. They gasped at the sight of a giant temple resting on the mountain before them.

Nobody spoke till Nimmo final said something. "Welcome to the Temple of the Sprits."[/align]

 

I know it's small but like I said the chapters will be rewriten in detial when I finsh the book.

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