IMO, the closest to a god card you can get without being utterly OTT!

[kuribo lord]

Let me know what you think......

 

 

Effect: This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned by tributing three monsters and reducing your life points to half their current ammount. This monster is unnafected by the effects of other cards. This monster may attack every monster on your opponents side of the field. Battle damage to your opponent as a result of battle involving this card becomes 0. This card cannot attack directly. When this monster battles, reduce its total ATK by the combined ATK of the monsters which it battles. When this card is in play, you may only have one more monster on your side of the field.

[Guest Zeonark]

Could you please post the effect? It's hard to read.

[JG.]

Effect is impossible to read, post it seperatly please.

[ragnarok1945]

it's an overused pic

 

and at any rate 9000 atk makes it WAY too OPed right off the bat, regardless of the other effects

[DMZ]

Well, ragnarok is right, pic is overused.

9000 ATK? Well, the fact that you cannot take battle damage from it does soften the pain, but I think 4000-5000 would be better in any case, this is too close to god cards.

 

6/10

[Cloister]

OPed even though the effect 9000!!!

Way too much

5/10

[Phanax Leminer]

Aiku: I already saw that brother. I think we use it too much.

 

OCG (Original Card Grammar): This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 monsters and halve your Life Points. This monster is unaffected by the effects of other cards. This card can attack as many of your opponent's monsters. Battle damage to your opponent as a result of battle involving this card becomes 0. This card cannot attack directly. When this monster declared a attack, decrease its ATK by the combined ATK of all your opponent's monsters. When this card is on the field, you can only control 1 other monster.

 

Effect: WAY overpowered. The card is unaffected by effects, destroys all your opponent's monsters in a single turn and you can still can defeat him by using the other monster. Plus, 9000 ATK? It's over the strength of any cards, even for some gods cards.

 

Image and Name: One word: Lazyness. The image is not the problem, it's the name. The name lack of originality and I don't like it.

 

Overall: 0.9/10

[DMZ]

Phanax, maybe noted by a 2 star member, but even your OCG fix has mistakes...

[Jazin Kay]

No need to say it can't attack directly ig damage it deals is 0 anyway...

[Lord Smeagle]

Is...really just not very good, sorry. It's contrived, overdone, OCG is bad, pic is great but rather overused...nah, it's just plain bad.

 

2/10, for at least making the effort at NOT having a 1-turn kill. But seriously, scrap it and try again.

[kuribo lord]

Teeheehee. Everyone here is so serious, lol. I only post cards as ideas come into my head, and do so because it is fun. If everyone on this site was working for upper deck entertainment or something, creating cards which would potentially be used for the TCG, then I would be stressing about OCG, overused images, etc as well, but since (as far as I know) this is not the case, Im just going to keep making cards as the ideas arise. Soz if this one is not to everyone's taste, LOL. Check out some of my other ideas sometime, LOL. See you guys around.....