Shinwa Posted December 12, 2009 Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 Please help ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PyroWildcat Posted December 12, 2009 Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 This is quite good in terms of correctness, actually. Just a couple things: - In this case, "in your opponent's battle phase" should probably be "when your opponent declares an attack" - monster is not capitalized - This card would be more of a Normal Trap than a Counter-Trap - I think "Choose" would be better written as "Select", but that might just be me. The picture's good; there is a little text in the corner, but at least it's small and out of the way. The name also seems to fit. The effect isn't anything overly special, but it certainly isn't bad for an early try. Nice work here! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 choose shud be select, in shud be during and monster shud be lowercase Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 battle phase=Battle Phasenice card:) 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Free Style Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 That's a nice card. Worth using. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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