Pyrons Begining need Comments

[Dr. Percival Cox]

I need some comments on if I should Keep going.

 

[.area51player.]

2nd card has Synchro effect, but it's not a synchro.

Terrible grammar, sorry.

Both effects are the same...

1st pic is overused.

[Dr. Percival Cox]

2nd card has Synchro effect' date=' but it's not a synchro.

Terrible grammar, sorry.

Both effects are the same...

1st pic is overused.

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The second one was made from the first disregard the efect

[~Wright~]

Advice for archetype making:

Make the cards in the archetype share a common theme.

Lightsworns: Milling

Crystal Beasts: Sending cards to spell and trap card zones.

Blackwings: Quick Special Summon/Beatdown

You get the point.

 

Advice for pictures:

See the links in my sig. You should find almost any image you need in one of those links.

 

Advice for cards:

Pyron Destroyer Dragon:

OCG: 8/25

Picture/Name: 20/25

Effect: 7/25

Balance: 16/25

Make the effects nice and long and complicated. "When this card is Synchro Summoned, Special Summon 1 "Pyron" monster from your Graveyard" (that's an OCG fix by the way) is not interesting. The first card is also overpowered. A level 7 monster should not have 3000 ATK.

 

Pyron Blaze Hound

OCG: 4/25

Picture/Name: 20/25

Effect: 7/25

Balance: 14/25

 

This should be a Synchro Monster. Again, the effect is way to simple.

[ragnarok1945]

card1's picture is overused

 

the 2nd one shouldn't have the synchro summoning material on it since it's not a synchro monster

 

the first card also has horrible spelling and the effect WAY too simple for a synchro

 

6/10