kliffi Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 "Tsukamu no Senshi" is Japanese for "Grapple Warrior""Tsubasa no Senshi" is Japanese for "Wing Warrior" (Think Windstorm of Etaqua) [spoiler=Grapple Warrior] Lore:Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this monster on the field, you can equip it to a face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field whose DEF is less than this card's ATK as an Equip Spell Card, OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. Decrease the ATK and DEF of the equipped monster by 1000 during each of your opponent's Standby Phases. The equipped monster cannot attack unless your opponent pays 200 Life Points. Once the equipped monster's ATK or DEF is reduced to 0, destroy the equipped monster. When the equipped monster is removed from the field, Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. If you attack a monster equipped by this card, flip a coin. If the result is heads, destroy the equipped monster. If the result is tails, destroy this card. During the End Phase of a turn this card has inflicted Battle Damage to your opponent, you can send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Tsubasa no Senshi" from your Hand or Deck. [spoiler=Wing Warrior] Lore:This card is also treated as a Winged Beast-type. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, you can change the Battle Positions of all face-up monsters on the field except this card, OR change the Battle Positions of all face-down Defense Position monsters on the field into face-up Attack Position. During the End Phase of a turn this card has inflicted Battle Damage to your opponent, you can send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Tsukamu no Senshi" from your hand or Deck. The effects, I know only tie together in the end with the "Special Summon" effect, but think: If you were flying, would you do the same things you'd do if you were on the ground? ^ Prophecy. --- Comment/rate! Please fix all OCG errors!! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 It seems rather UP'd. The ATK decrease should be higher, like 800 a turn (I mean, he's supposed to be crushing/choking the monster to death, right?) but other than that, it's pretty good and highly original. I'd run it, anyway. 9.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 You're definitely right. I'm surprised I didn't catch that. Fixed to 700... just sounded right to me :) Yeah it should def. Be a quicker process, like a 3-turn kill. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 700 atk/def decrease is still a little low, make it 1000 instead once you do that, then this card will be well balanced out, and it has an original effect too 9.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Thanks for fix. That would balance it out. I worry the Union OCG standard is breached here... ill fix that ASAP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted December 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 Added a second card that would tie in with the other. Thoughts? **Yes, the pictures do tie together and do, in fact, illustrate the same character. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted December 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 D: Any comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 Added a second card that would tie in with the other. Thoughts? **Yes' date=' the pictures do tie together and do, in fact, illustrate the same character.[/quote'] glad to see you changed it to my suggestion, and your 2nd card is also balanced out to it, so I'll rate it 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted December 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 Thanks. I plan on making a Trap or Spell support when I find a good pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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