Yoface Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PyroWildcat Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 - Considering both that many other monsters have 3000 ATK and Radec has a rather pitiful DEF, he really shouldn't be a Level 10 monster. 7 or 8 would work just fine. - Your OCG just plain isn't in the right card game. I hate saying your OCG is wrong without getting into specifics, but you really need to just go to the OCG thread and/or look at official cards to see how they word effects. - Effect monsters do not have flavor text. Basically, it doesn't look that bad for someone just starting out, but you really need to get a handle on how these cards work before continuing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 effect monsters dont have descriptions dude, and i wud look at some cards to get a hang of OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yoface Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 There that better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XP_Lulz Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Still has horrible OCG. Looks like a mixture of another game and yugioh. Also, pic needs background. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Verebazs2 Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 OCG fix (or at least I'll try- I'm quite a beginer too) :If you didn't declare an attack during your Battle Phase, destroy 1 Monster your Opponent controlls, during your End Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yoface Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Is this better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Alda Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 It's getting better, but it is WAY overpowered. Its effect is nice (though poor OCG), but why use its effect when it could bulldoze most monsters in battle anyway? I would lower its ATK and DEF greatly (2000 or so ATK and slightly lower DEF should do nicely). Consequently, you would need to reduce its Level Stars down to 5 or 6. I'm new to this site as well, so trust me, I've had to deal with this sort of problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yoface Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Lore:If the controlling player skips his/her turn this card can kill any monster on both sides of the field of the controlling players choosing.This card will be sent back to the deck if it is killed by Trap card or Spell card. This effect can only used twice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Alda Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Well, you've got the attack and level down, but the OCG still needs a lot of work. You're getting better each time, though. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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