Brendano Harns Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 [align=center]Self Drawn. Please help fix OCG and balance out. [spoiler=][size=medium]This card is also treated as Rock-Type monster. When your opponent declares an attack when you control no monsters, you can destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card you control to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard and make this card the attack target. Once per turn, you can destroy 1 card on the field. During the turn this effect is activated, this card cannot declare an attack.[/size][/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delta_Sigma Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Nice drawing, and the name fits well with it. Anyway, to help with the balancing issues on it, how many times can it revive itself to defend you like that? And is there a cost for doing so? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Balanced for a Lv5, yet a bit bland. Amazing art work as well. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 the last two sentences should go first in the text, basically "When your opponent declares an attack when you control no monsters, you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard and make this card the attack target. This card is also treated as Rock-Type monster. Once per turn, you can destroy 1 card on the field. During the turn this effect is activated, this card cannot declare an attack." the OCG is fine, just get the sentence order right 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DMZ Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Good picture. Minor OCG errors, as ragnarok pointed out. Nice effect. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delta_Sigma Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Actually, if this thing can be placed in defense position, and can be summoned from the graveyard an unlimited amount of times a turn long as your field is empty, its a perfect defense barring piercing or removing from play effects. That might need to be changed a little. Though I do like the effect, its very nice. Maybe make itself remove itself from play when removed from the field when summoned in that additional manner? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
turbo10k Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 I'd like a decent revival cost too...'make this card attack the target' doesn't cut it either in OCG or any comprehensible effect. What you mean is that you start your own battlephase during your opponent's turn? No, just summon it in DEF position and that's it!! A nice 6/10 Picture fitting but could've been better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 I'd like a decent revival cost too...'make this card attack the target' doesn't cut it either in OCG or any comprehensible effect. What you mean is that you start your own battlephase during your opponent's turn? No' date=' just summon it in DEF position and that's it!! A nice 6/10 Picture fitting but could've been better[/quote'] No. "Make this card the attack target" means that the monster that was just attacking has to attack it. It doesn't mean that it attacks. Actually' date=' if this thing can be placed in defense position, and can be summoned from the graveyard an unlimited amount of times a turn long as your field is empty, its a perfect defense barring piercing or removing from play effects. That might need to be changed a little. Though I do like the effect, its very nice. Maybe make itself remove itself from play when removed from the field when summoned in that additional manner?[/quote'] Added revival cost will be added. Good picture. Minor OCG errors' date=' as ragnarok pointed out. Nice effect. 9.5/10[/quote'] Thanks! ^_^ the last two sentences should go first in the text' date=' basically "When your opponent declares an attack when you control no monsters, you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard and make this card the attack target. This card is also treated as Rock-Type monster. Once per turn, you can destroy 1 card on the field. During the turn this effect is activated, this card cannot declare an attack." the OCG is fine, just get the sentence order right 9.5/10[/quote'] Will do. ;D Balanced for a Lv5' date=' yet a bit bland. Amazing art work as well. 9.5/10[/quote'] Bland? OH NOES! D: Nice drawing' date=' and the name fits well with it. Anyway, to help with the balancing issues on it, how many times can it revive itself to defend you like that? And is there a cost for doing so?[/quote'] Added cost will be added. EDIT: Redone. L00k. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Great pic, minor ocg errors9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zektor Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 awesome pic effects a little bland.9.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted December 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 If you are going to leave a comment complaining about OCG errors, please fix them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted December 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 BUMP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted December 19, 2009 Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 Just noticed this, This card is also treated as a Rock-Type monster needs to be the first sentence. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted December 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 That's what I thought. Raganrok told me differently. I'll fix it. Fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted December 19, 2009 Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 Balanced for a Lv5' date=' yet a bit bland. Amazing art work as well. 9.5/10[/quote'] this but the image needs croping^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted December 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 Okay, I'll crop it. I usually over crop. EDIT: Fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted December 19, 2009 Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 looks way better now :)nice one ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted December 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 Thanks! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted December 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 I added some c4ds and, as I have never used them before, it may look pretty novicely done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 sorry a little groggy right now, what's c4ds again? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted December 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 They are effects, basically, 3-D effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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