ExtremeG Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 [spoiler=LORE] If there is a Field Card on the field while this card is on the field, destroy this monster immediatly. If this card is destroyed by a card that you control, you can place it in the Field Card Zone. While this card is in the Field Card Zone, decrease the ATK of all monsters on the field by 500. During a player's Main Phase, Special Summon 1 "Primordial Token" to the player's side of the field. The ATK of the "Primordial Token" becomes equal to the total ATK decreased by this cards effect during this turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 I dig it, but I think the third sentence should be: During each player's Standby Phase, if this card is in the Field Card Zone, decrease the ATK of all monsters on the field by 500. Otherwise is great. 9.2/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DMZ Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Nice effect, creative to put it into the field card zone. Nice pic. Minor OCG errors. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
turbo10k Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Nice Idea!! Good work! Little OCG error (third effect sentence), but otherwise ok. To power it up a bit, why don't you let it be moved to the field card zone after it is destroyed simply, not by your own card effect...easier to get it where you want therefore.Ooops forgot rating!! 9!!/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ExtremeG Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Thanx for the tips! I'll get right on those! XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Minor ocg errorsEverything else is fineA Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masey 4 AVFC Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 cool card 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 OCG errors have been pointed out already there's nothing wrong with this card's effect, it is well balanced out 9.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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