Grunt Issun Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 this is my cool ALMOST complete set of Swordmen that revolve around this guy and his awsome wepon where he lives his evil arch enemy when the two come together (note not a fusion IDK why) The evil guys new trap so what do you think, good bad, awsome, horrible, im open to all critisim Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 ALL criticism? Horrible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Cursed Reaction Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Don't use white as a background in your pictures and also there is OCG errors. If you are going to use Evil Galaxy Swordsman and Swordsman Taylana, Hero of the Galaxy for the ritual. Duel Swordsman of the Galaxy must be 8 or less Stars. Evil Galaxy Swordsman says ogf. Should say of. Duel Swordsman of the Galaxy: This card cannot be this card cannot be summoned except by the effect of "Dual Sword Ritual". When this card attacks a monster in Defense Position who's DEF is lower than this card's ATK, inflict the difference as damage to your opponent's lifepoints. Dual Sword Ritual: Ritual Summon "Duel Swordsman of the Galaxy" by sending to the graveyard "Evil Galaxy Swordsman" and "Swordsman Taylana, Hero of the Galaxy" from your side of the field or from your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Not Horrible...But not Awesome... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Don't use white as a background in your pictures and also there is OCG errors. If you are going to use Evil Galaxy Swordsman and Swordsman Taylana' date=' Hero of the Galaxy for the ritual. Duel Swordsman of the Galaxy must be 8 or less Stars. Evil Galaxy Swordsman says ogf. Should say of. Duel Swordsman of the Galaxy: This card cannot be this card cannot be summoned except by the effect of "Dual Sword Ritual". When this card attacks a monster in Defense Position who's DEF is lower than this card's ATK, inflict the difference as damage to your opponent's lifepoints. Dual Sword Ritual: Ritual Summon "Duel Swordsman of the Galaxy" by sending to the graveyard "Evil Galaxy Swordsman" and "Swordsman Taylana, Hero of the Galaxy" from your side of the field or from your hand.[/quote'] Oh ok thanks, Ill Fix those and update thisALL criticism? Horrible. Ok whats horrible Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 the OCG errors have been pointed out already your vanillas will be ok once you add in more spell/trap support, one isn't enough for them 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archie17 Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 All pics are unimpressive, and your normal monster has OP'ed stats of 2000/2000. THe strongest known Normal Level 4 monster's stats are 2000/100 so that normal lvl 4 monster is off the charts overpowered. Try using better pics and better stats. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TEZZORI Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Your normal monster is too strong for lvl4 (stronger than a lot of lvl5s actually) With your ritual monster i know its an internet image as monsters can be hard to draw, but the dual sword ritual card you could draw yourself using the same swords as in the monsters image otherwise it just looks blah... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 All pics are unimpressive' date=' and your normal monster has OP'ed stats of 2000/2000. THe strongest known Normal Level 4 monster's stats are 2000/100 so that normal lvl 4 monster is off the charts overpowered. Try using better pics and better stats. so lvl 6?[hr']made a few updates but not ready yet still need some image adjustments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Update complete when I add anough cards i'll bring it to full set Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DMZ Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Hmm, not too impressive. Pictures, not good OCG and a couple of unbalances. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Hmm' date=' not too impressive. Pictures, not good OCG and a couple of unbalances. 5/10[/quote'] HOW unbalanced and WHO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DMZ Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Ehm...pretty much all of them....Taylana would be a friggin 3200 ATK with his equip and the field Spell, the ritual would surpass that even more.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Ehm...pretty much all of them....Taylana would be a friggin 3200 ATK with his equip and the field Spell' date=' the ritual would surpass that even more....[/quote'] so mabye lossen up the effect a little, like from 700 to 400 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 I davled in the OP arts and found out my spell card was OPed so i reduced it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 I really think these cards pics could use improvement You should use the Showcase to get better quality of cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted December 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 okay there wernt any good things at the showcase so i stick with them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted December 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 ive changed my name becuase saying almost complete sounded weird since it might never be finished Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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