Hunterback Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 This is the 2nd set that I've made. If anyone wants image credit, mainly because I did these pics and forgot who owned each pic, please PM me so I can give you proper credit. This is a basic Fairy control set. I know that there is a good chance of cards being OP'ed, so please tell me which ones. Monster Cards Spell Cards Trap Cards Synchro Cards Please tell me what's wrong. And, again, PM me if you want image credit. EDIT:Image credit goes to MTG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Excallibur Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 Phenoc's effect is too bland, Forgiveness is slightly Op'ed (basically a pumped up clock tower prison), Holy Light is a little to bland, Fein and Lough have too bland effects especially for synchros and Guardian Angel Lord's pic is Overused (not too much though) *inhales deeply*, okay now that I've pointed out flaws I think it's overall a nice well thought out idea and I'm not going to be the one to nag you about OCG fixes. 7.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=^.^= Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 Sork-Nal and the Amulet are pics from MTG(Magic the Gathering) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hunterback Posted December 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 Changed Forgiveness. Now, how do you suggest I liven up the bland cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Excallibur Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 I dunno there your cards (now that I look at it Toun-Al is extremely Overpowered a 2600 defense and no 4+ monster can attack, you need a drawback(, random thought though give Phenoc a return to hand effect so it is like that one Buuny spirit card (I forget its name), and give it a drawback, like your opponent draws 1 card, that should even that card out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hunterback Posted December 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 Thanks! Changes that you suggested are done. And, yes, I know that they are my cards, but I am still new at this and would gladly take advise from more experienced card designers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeroLuneth Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 I've noticed that a lot of the cards in this set are very similar or the exactly the same as some real cards, but with a different picture or ATK and DEF, which is not very creative. An error with some of the cards is that you didn't put Guardian Angel in quotation marks on a few of them. Some of the pictures have bad quality or they are overused.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hunterback Posted December 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 Ok. Thanks. Changes are done. I got the idea for this set from looking at Guardian Angel Joan. Also, if you search for the thread called "Soul set" in the Finished sets section, you'll see why I am trying effects that are similar to other cards. Was just trying to not get too crazy with the effects or get too OP'ed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 nice fairy pics, a few are blurry or overused Fein, Gunz, and Lough need more effects, they're too short for a synchro right now 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hunterback Posted December 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 Fixed. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 15, 2009 Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 good enough, you added more so I'll raise the rate to 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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