Barian Warlord Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 Some cards I put together tell me what you think. When this card is in your hand and your opponent deals damage to your life points activate the one of this cards 2 effects. This card cannot be destroyed by battle.- If your opponent deals damage to you with a card effect send this card from your hand to the graveyard and negate the damage and deal the same amount to your opponent, they cannot attack this turn. -If your opponents deals damage to your life by battle and you have no monster cards on your side of the field special summon this card to your side of the field in face up defense position.And the synchros My mightiest monsterWhen this card attacks you can destroy 1 spell or trap card on the field, your opponent cannot select your cards as the target of spell, trap, or monster effects. During your standby faze pay 1000 life points if you do not send this card back to your extra deck and place 1 of the monsters used to synchro summon this card back in your deck and the other special summon back onto your side of the field in face up ATK or DEF. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 2nd card is Lucario.5th card is Gospel, from Mega Man Battle Network 2.6th card is Bass.EXE from Mega Man Battle Network.11th card is... I don't remember, but he's from one of the Mega Man Star Force games.12th card is Night Terror from Soul Caliber III.13th card is Omega from Mega Man Zero 3.Cards 16 and 17 are different forms of Skeith, I think. From the .hack game series.19th card is Venom from the Spider Man series.20th card is a boss from one of the Mega Man Star Force games, I can't remember which one. Just thought you deserved to know. Poor images, OCG errors everywhere, etc. I can't see someone rating these, as a whole, higher than a 2 out of 10. Just being honest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DMZ Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 Level 4 with 2200 ATK(even if it does have 0 dEF)??A LOT of OCg errors, overpowered, Pop cullture pics. 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 You can also tell the entire effect text of Stardust Paladin was copied and pasted from Stardust Dragon's Wikia page. Window into the mind. Freud would have a field day on YCM. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TEZZORI Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 There are some problems with the wording, check the OCG thread for how to improve this. For the most part though i like these cards. Some of the pics may be widely known but at least they aren't the same old blurry ones i'm finding everyone uses, so i like them, in particiular the lucario/staraptor combo! The main reason i like these is that most the effects are quite original as well as realistic, althogh some are clearly overpowered, but with work you can correct them. e.g. the ones who aren't affected by spells, traps or effects - just pick one. Also generally a monster with 1500 or more ATK is lv4 minimum. Fallen angel lemek should either have a weaker effect or it should be lvl6 minimum. Berzerk beast wouldn't be allowed it has powers like winged dragon of ra. Anyway points for effort and creativity, fix these and i will re-rate. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barian Warlord Posted December 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 Leasened the effect.Forgot last time.Weakened. Weakened.Weakened this one and don't forget the effect is a double edged sword. Oh and I wanted Stardust Paliden to have the same effect as Stardust Dragon thats why i got it from the wiki page if it's wrong can you tell me what it should say, and about the pics from games and stuff I think it should only be in pop culture ifit were supposed to be a card about them not if you just use there pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DMZ Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 Situation: Begin of the duel... Opponent has 7900 LP, you have 8000. Summon Berzerk Beast, leave your self 100 LP, and you're done.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 Berzerk Beast is still OPed. It wouldn't matter if you paid down to 1LP if you could end the game in one strike. If your LP is 2 higher than your opponent's, at least, attack directly with that and win. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barian Warlord Posted December 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 BUt if the have a destruct card then you have no monster and 1 LP but yay I want to keep the effect but dumb it down if anybody has any ideas please tell me.Also if you see an OCg error can you please tell me so I can fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DMZ Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 Most destruct cards work when a monster is Summoned, so it would be destroyed before the effect could be applied. And even then, IF you have Monster Reborn/Reincarnation, Premature Burial or any other "Bring back" cards you would still win the duel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barian Warlord Posted December 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 This card cannot be special summoned, when this card is normal or set summoned reduce your life points however much you want and this cards attack equals the amount of life points you sacrificed. This card is imune to all of its owners monster, spell, and trap card effects. Does this help. I am thinking of abandaning this card but I really don't want to leave it with flaws. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 Most destruct cards work when a monster is Summoned' date=' so it would be destroyed before the effect could be applied. And even then, IF you have Monster Reborn/Reincarnation, Premature Burial or any other "Bring back" cards you would still win the duel.[/quote']If a card that destroys or otherwise removes it from the field is chained to it's summon, the effect will still activate and resolve. After which, the effect that is destroying it resolves and knocks it away. And his LP would remain at whatever he lowered them to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DMZ Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 The whole Life Point/ATK is the key problem here. You are adding all kinds of other effects... Let me make this clear: As long as "reduce your life points however much you want and this cards attack equals the amount of life points you sacrificed." is on the card, it is too strong. Suggestion and OCG fix(Suggestion is bold) Current OCG fix:This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Normal Summoned or Set you can pay any amount of Life Points to increase this card's ATK by the same amount. Your Spell and Trap Cards cannot target this card. Here is what I SUGGEST:This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Normal Summoned or Set you can pay any amount of Life Points to increase this card's ATK by half the amount of Life Points paid. Your Spell and Trap Cards cannot target this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
賢狼ホロ Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 Or you could set a limit;"When this card is Summoned pay up to 2000 Life Points. This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the Life Points paid."Perhaps? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mindscatter Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 Ok these are really random. I've never seen such randomness for a long time...and you know what? I miss the days that lacked randomness...btw your cards are overpowered, so 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DMZ Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 Limits, my suggestion, all are fine if they balance out the card :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barian Warlord Posted December 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DMZ Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 Now THAT is a lot better 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barian Warlord Posted December 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 I was expecting to get more trouble from this card.(I thought of this card after watching the last episode of the anime)When this card is in your hand and your opponent deals damage to your life points activate the one of this cards 2 effects. This card cannot be destroyed by battle.- If your opponent deals damage to you with a card effect send this card from your hand to the graveyard and negate the damage and deal the same amount to your opponent, they cannot attack this turn. -If your opponents deals damage to your life by battle and you have no monster cards on your side of the field special summon this card to your side of the field in face up defense position.Can someone tell me how to shorten this!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DMZ Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 I can try... This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card is in your hand you can activate 1 of the following effects:- If your opponent deals Direct Damage to you with a card effect send this card from your hand to the Graveyard and inflict the damage to your opponent instead.-If your opponent deals Direct Damage to you by battle, Special Summon this card to your field in face-up Defense Position. Hope this was shorter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barian Warlord Posted December 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 Thanks for all the work you've done in helping me I'll probably come out with 20 or so spell and trap cards soon cuz I feel they are my weakness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DMZ Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 No problem. If you want more help you can PM me ( your cards) any time :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 14, 2009 Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 many short effects, but fortunately the low levels compensate for this there's some minor wording errors that have been pointed out already 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barian Warlord Posted December 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 Added a new synchro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 15, 2009 Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 use Fairy, not Angel for the type rest of the effect looks fine for a synchro though 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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