ff00I Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 some small errors. in your ritual monster, you wrote affect in place of effect. i also think you sponge bob square pants card is a little overpowered with its effect for a level 5 monster6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n.gangster Posted January 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 some small errors. in your ritual monster' date=' you wrote affect in place of effect. i also think you sponge bob square pants card is a little overpowered with its effect for a level 5 monster6.5/10[/quote'] thanks for your review ff00I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n.gangster Posted January 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted January 22, 2010 Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 Whoo hooSpongebobOCG ErrorsFakeTypesCan be Improved5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n.gangster Posted January 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 thank alot again dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teh ZWOOTS Posted January 22, 2010 Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 Bit overpowered, imo. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sp1at Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 i personly think spongebob shouldn't be that strong. I also think Sandy should be stronger you know because sandy beats spongebob all the time. And she can through a anchor like 15 yards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n.gangster Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 oh ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 - The effect of "Spongebob Oldpants" is overpowered. Either add a drawback to its effect, or lower its ATK/DEF drastically. It should also mention how it can only b Ritual Summoned by the Ritual Spell Card "Sandy's Gay Gun".-The pictures can be a lot better. Try to upload ones that have interesting backgrounds that relate to the character, and not just being plain-white.-Try not to use fake Types, since Spongebob is able to be a Fish-Type, or Aqua-Type. Also: Animal= Beast-Type.-The effects are meh. They are fair, but they are not creative. I would've thought that the Spongebob monsters share a particular effect to make them Support eachother like an Archetype. This also goes to the last 2 cards, too. Both of them can have great effect if you be more imaginative to come up with some.-Lots and lots of OCG errors. For example, the fixed versions should be:Spongebob Thugpants:"During each player's Main Phase 1, put 1 Sponge Counter on this card (max. 3). You can remove 3 Sponge Counters from this card to look at 1 cad in your opponent's hand. If it is a Spell Card, you can activate it on your field."Sandy's Ray Gun:"This card is used to Ritual Summon "Spongebob Oldpants". You must also pay 1000 Life Points and Tribute 3 Sponge-Type monsters you control.Sandy Cheeks:"FLIP: Your opponent takes 500 damage."The rest of cards too have OCG errors, but you get the picture.-There's an Attachment at the end of them. However, the stats you gave are fair, and the Attributes are fine, so i'll give you that. But to make these cards a lot better, you need to understand what me and the others are saying about the Set so far and make those improvements. So far, they are okay. 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n.gangster Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 thankz starly_64 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GenerationX Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 You ass, these cards suck, why are you lying to him? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n.gangster Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 shut up genartion x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
inFAMOUS cole Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 these are awkward Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n.gangster Posted January 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2010 bump bump bump it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YugiMasterMind Posted January 26, 2010 Report Share Posted January 26, 2010 Find a background for sandy and her ray gun thing 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-SupernovA- Posted January 27, 2010 Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 Tip: Don't use fake types, not many people like them due to the extreme lack of realism. Killer BobTip: Drop is ATK to 1400-1500. SpongeBob OldpantsOCG Fix: This card can only be Ritual Summoned by the Ritual Spell Card, "Sandy's Ray Gun". Each Main Phase, destroy all monsters on your opponent's side of the field, their effects are negated.Tip:Scrap the shitty effect and think of a new one. Drop DEF to 1600-1700. Drop ATK to 2500-2800. Sandy's Ray GunOCG Fix: This card is used to Ritual Summon "SpongeBob Oldpants". You must also pay 1000 Life Points or offer 3 Sponge-Type cards from your field or hand. Sponge Bob Square PantsOCG Fix: When this card is successfully Flip Summoned, select 2 cards on the field and in your opponent's hand. The selected cards are sent to the Graveyard.Tip: Drop ATK to 600-900. Drop DEF to 300-600. Drop to Level Stars to 1-2. SpongeBob ThugpantsOCG Fix: Each Main Phase, put 1 Sponge Counter on this card (Max 3). When this card has 3 Sponge Counters, remove all Sponge Counters from this card and select 1 monster from your opponent's hand. The selected monster is Special Summoned to your side of the field.Tip: Fits the name, but the effect is completely OP. Fix it. DryBob SquarepantsOCG Fix: When this monster is chosen as a attack target by your opponent, change the attack to another Sponge-Type monster under your control.Tip:Swap the ATK and DEF around, and switch the effect to - When this monster is under your control, it is the only Sponge-Type monster under your control that can be chosen as a attack target. PatrickTip: Not worth fixing the boring effect, make a new one. Sandy CheeksOCG Fix: When this card is successfully Flip Summoned, the opponent loses 500 Life Points.Tip: Increase ATK to 1500-1800. Increase DEF to 1200-1300. Hope this helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kamaskan1120 Posted January 27, 2010 Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 wats up! this is an awesome deck so far. 'im new to this and cant figure out how to post my cards to a post. can u help me!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted January 27, 2010 Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 wats up! this is an awesome deck so far. 'im new to this and cant figure out how to post my cards to a post. can u help me!!! 1. Questions like these belong in the Questions & Help Section, not in someone else's thread.2. Click on your finished card, then copy the link below it into your thread. You're welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n.gangster Posted February 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 wats up! this is an awesome deck so far. 'im new to this and cant figure out how to post my cards to a post. can u help me!!! 1. Questions like these belong in the Questions & Help Section' date=' not in someone else's thread.2. Click on your finished card, then copy the link below it into your thread. You're welcome.[/quote'] thankz for backing me up starly_64 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n.gangster Posted February 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2010 bumpedy bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n.gangster Posted February 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 Ah I see your constently bumbing this Well guess what THIS THREAD IS MORE LIKELY to Die than any other thread 7.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 Picture: 6/10. Overused and no backround OCG: 5/10... Wow, bad... Sorry... Total: 9/10. {Cause I am cool like that.} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 n.gangster you also necrobumbed this thread to Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 Ah I see your constently bumbing this Well guess what THIS THREAD IS MORE LIKELY to Die than any other thread 7.1/10 I agree. You didn't even make those changes I told you about. Please do not necrobump this thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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