Armoured beast card

[Dmaker]

here, plz tell me if anything is wrong with it

[DMZ]

I used this pic before, so I know a little about it.

First: The name is not really creative(might be me)

2nd: Couple of spelling mistakes: (Medieval) and (it's)

3rd: The picture doesn't really look beasty. More a machine-type/fiend(See those purple muscles?)/Zombie(The skull)

Also, for a level 6 it's ATK and DEF are a little low. Make it level 5 :)

 

That's it basically.

 

8.5/10(+0.5 because it's a vanilla)

[Dark Lightning]

I used this pic before' date=' so I know a little about it.

First: The name is not really creative(might be me)

2nd: Couple of spelling mistakes: (Med[b']ie[/b]val) and (it's)

3rd: The picture doesn't really look beasty. More a machine-type/fiend(See those purple muscles?)/Zombie(The skull)

Also, for a level 6 it's ATK and DEF are a little low. Make it level 5 :)

 

That's it basically.

 

8.5/10(+0.5 because it's a vanilla)

 

And it's a Normal Card...

[Cloister]

It's well balanced since the DEF is higher than the ATK, though could raise the DEF to 2300 or even 2500 because it's armor

 

Name: Armoured Skull Beast

 

And good description and pic (though over used, but I have it on 1 of my cards)

8/10

[DMZ]

I used this pic before' date=' so I know a little about it.

First: The name is not really creative(might be me)

2nd: Couple of spelling mistakes: (Med[b']ie[/b]val) and (it's)

3rd: The picture doesn't really look beasty. More a machine-type/fiend(See those purple muscles?)/Zombie(The skull)

Also, for a level 6 it's ATK and DEF are a little low. Make it level 5 :)

 

That's it basically.

 

8.5/10(+0.5 because it's a vanilla)

 

And it's a Normal Card...

 

Do I detect sarcasm?

[Dark Lightning]

I just don't like Normal Cards.

But I guess it's ok

[.Leo]

Start Level should be 4.

 

I think you could add more to the Flavor Text

 

~7/10~

[Cloister]

A lot of real cards have short texts but might want to like telling about it's background a little..

[DMZ]

Start Level should be 4.

 

I think you could add more to the Flavor Text

 

~7/10~

Ahem......1900ATK/2300DEF = level 4?

[Cloister]

For the stats now, it should be Level 5 but increase the DEF to 2300 or 2400 and it'll be good for Level 6

[DMZ]

For the stats now' date=' it should be Level 5 but increase the DEF to 2300 or 2400 and it'll be good for Level 6

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What he said

[HLG KillerNinja]

Tell me if some thing is wrong with this

 

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[-DOOM]

it's really UP. with this stats, it could be a level 4. but yeah, do the thing the Tomtekorv said, altough this is still a bit UP then.

 

name is not creative....... pic is ok. 6/10

[Cloister]

Cybertech Alligator has 2500 ATK and is Level 5 but that's OPed imo

[Barian Warlord]

I used this pic before' date=' so I know a little about it.

First: The name is not really creative(might be me)

2nd: Couple of spelling mistakes: (Med[b']ie[/b]val) and (it's)

3rd: The picture doesn't really look beasty. More a machine-type/fiend(See those purple muscles?)/Zombie(The skull)

Also, for a level 6 it's ATK and DEF are a little low. Make it level 5 :)

 

That's it basically.

 

8.5/10(+0.5 because it's a vanilla)

 

Sorry to say but it's is only used for it is, its is the right way of writing it. Pronouns don't use ' unless it is 2 words put together.

[DMZ]

What about if we are talking the the aura( example ) of the beast. Would that not be it's aura??

[Barian Warlord]

Nope its aura, if it was Armoured beast's aura then it would be a different story. Noun and pronoun stuff.

[DMZ]

Hmm yes, I suppose you are right. Good arguments.

But let's cut our senseless chatter and let other people rate too.

[ragnarok1945]

given it has 2100 def, it'll hold its own for lv6

 

now all you need is to add the s/t support and it'll be good

 

7/10

[Despair From The Dark]

Hah, I totally made that card as well. One of my favorite artists made the picture, Wen-M. Doesn't look like you sized the pic to fit the frame. And again, it has no effect. I'll give it a 6/10.

[gustavosuarez]

only for the card 7/10 becuase its a vanilla. if you add some support cards that use this monster could be better:)