AngelsShadow Posted December 15, 2009 Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 A few monsters from my new "Death's Calling Set" hope you like 'em! All feedback is welcome! [spoiler=DCS Preview] [spoiler=Verin the Dark Master Lore] "Verin"+"The Missing Eye". This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. When this card is Fusion Summoned select and control one Fiend-Type monster on your opponent's field for one turn. Increase ATK by 200 for every "Flesh Fiend" in your Graveyard. Increase ATK by 400 for every "Death Magician" in your Graveyard. If "Hakaisha, Verin's Minion" is on the field increase the ATK of this card by 600. I hope you enjoy reading these cards as much as I did making them, I think I'm getting better at this whole OCG thing whatdya think? Anyway, as always all criticism is still welcome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 15, 2009 Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 Elemental Despair's pic is overused Death Magician's first sentence in the text shouldn't be there, and it needs more effects than mere atk gain the same is true for Verin Flesh Fiend's 1st sentence in the text shouldn't be there 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AngelsShadow Posted December 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 Okay, thanks for the advice, I tweaked 'em a bit and changed the picture in Elemental Despair, I honestly didn't know anybody used it but I saw what you meant when I looked up "Elemental Dragon" in Google, lots of results with that picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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