ρhøєniχ Posted December 15, 2009 Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 [align=center]well he is my first attempt of making cards :/hope it is good^ Made By E-Hero Kyle ^ - - - - - ^ Made By Me^ [spoiler=[b]EN001 - The Rising Phoenix[/b]][spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "The Rebirth of the Phoenix". Once per turn, you can switch the battle position of this card. Each time this effect is activated flip a coin. If it is heads, deal Direct Damage to your opponent equal to this cards ATK. If it is tails, this card is destroyed and Special Summon a "Baby Phoenix" in defense position. [spoiler=[b]EN002 - The Rebirth of the Phoenix[/b]][spoiler=Lore]Send 1 face up "Baby Phoenix" you control with 2 Rebirth Counters to the graveyard and Special Summon a "The Rising Phoenix". [spoiler=[b]EN003 - Baby Phoenix[/b]][spoiler=Lore]Once per turn during your Standby Phase, place 1 Rebirth Counter (max 4.) on this card. You can remove 2 Rebirth Counters to send 1 card on the field to the Graveyard. [spoiler=[b]EN004 - Supernova[/b]][spoiler=Lore]While this card is on the field, increase the ATK of all FIRE monsters by 600 and decrease DEF by 400. [spoiler=[b]EN005 - Fallen Phoenix Feathers[/b]][spoiler=Lore]Activate this card when a Winged Beast-Type monster is sent to the graveyard. Send 1 face down card on your opponents side of the field to the graveyard. [spoiler=[b]EN006 - Angel of Rebirth[/b]][spoiler=Lore]1 FIRE Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Synchro Summoned, increase your Life Points by 500 for each FIRE monster in your graveyard. Once per turn you can pay 1000 Life Points to special summon a FIRE monster from the graveyard. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Mousy Posted December 15, 2009 Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 Put it bluntly. You suck. I would point out the errors, but I'm lazy, I will if you give the lores. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted December 15, 2009 Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 Very, very, very underpowered. Getting out The Rising Phoenix requires you to defend that weakling for six whole turns, and even if you manage that, you'll still have a fifty-fifty chance of it self-destructing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ρhøєniχ Posted December 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 Put it bluntly. You suck. I would point out the errors' date=' but I'm lazy, I will if you give the lores.[/quote'] ok i added lores tell me my mistakesVery' date=' very, very underpowered. Getting out The Rising Phoenix requires you to defend that weakling for six whole turns, and even if you manage that, you'll still have a fifty-fifty chance of it self-destructing.[/quote'] uhmmm defend for 3 turns.. and its nota 50-50 chance only if you change positions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted December 15, 2009 Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 Very' date=' very, very underpowered. Getting out The Rising Phoenix requires you to defend that weakling for six whole turns, and even if you manage that, you'll still have a fifty-fifty chance of it self-destructing.[/quote'] uhmmm defend for 3 turns.. and its nota 50-50 chance only if you change positions Three of your turns, three of your opponent's turns. Six in total. That's how turns are counted; see Final Countdown. And of course you could decide not to use the effect... but if you do that then you just went through that whole process for nothing more than a 2800 ATK beatstick, which is absurd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Mousy Posted December 15, 2009 Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 These cards were poorly thought out. As crab helmet pointed out already, it's very underpowered. Compare this with something like Blue Eyes White Dragon. Or even Armed Dragon Lv 3, 5, 7. It takes 3 turns for AD Lv 3 to evolve to Lv 7. And Armed Dragon Level 7 is actually stronger than "The Rising Phoenix". However, Lv 5 is a 2400 ATK Monster, with an effect similar to Lv 7, where as your monster has no intermediate stage and is much harder to summon, and requires a Specific Spell Card. I say you suck to everyone. Ignore me, I'm stupid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ρhøєniχ Posted December 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 ok do you have any suggestion on improving them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Mousy Posted December 15, 2009 Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 Nope. Sorry. Look at this though:http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-174269.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ρhøєniχ Posted December 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 ok thanks a lot! but i need help with the OCG and making the cards have a good ATK and DEF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 15, 2009 Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 see with 6 turns of defending it it's unlikely Rising Phoenix will actually get onto the field and therefore it makes it very Uped. Your monster stats are just fine the way they are though, no need for changes there 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ρhøєniχ Posted December 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 see with 6 turns of defending it it's unlikely Rising Phoenix will actually get onto the field and therefore it makes it very Uped. Your monster stats are just fine the way they are though' date=' no need for changes there 7/10[/quote'] so should i change it to 2 counters so it will be 4 turns? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 make things easier, you going to do that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ρhøєniχ Posted December 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 make things easier' date=' you going to do that?[/quote'] yeah i did it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ρhøєniχ Posted December 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 hey i added more cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 21, 2009 Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 angel of rebirth's pic is slightly overused FIRE is an attribute, not a type so remove the "type" in the text of Supernova and your synchro 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ρhøєniχ Posted December 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 angel of rebirth's pic is slightly overused FIRE is an attribute' date=' not a type so remove the "type" in the text of Supernova and your synchro 7/10[/quote'] whoops sorry i keep forgetting.. il change it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 21, 2009 Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 that's better, now I can raise the rate to 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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