General Assclown Posted December 15, 2009 Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 [align=center]---- Universal Portal ---- [spoiler=Lore/Effect]This card can only be activated when your Opponent declares an attack. Destroy the attacking monster and inflict damage to your Opponent x300 for every level of the destroyed monster (Max. 2000). During your Opponent's next End Phase, Special Summon the destroyed monster in face-up Attack Position on your Opponent's field. The Special Summoned monster is then treated as an Effect Monster with the following effect: - This card cannot declare an attack unless the card's controller sends the top card of their Deck to the Graveyard. [spoiler=Other Info]- Restricted to 2 per Deck.- Image Credit is to Jung Park. [spoiler=My Comments]Just a random card I made. I waz bored, needed something to do so .... voila! OCG should be fine as well. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 15, 2009 Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 you forgot to say special summon the destroyed monster to who's side of the field other than that this card looks balanced enough 9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted December 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 you forgot to say special summon the destroyed monster to who's side of the field other than that this card looks balanced enough 9.3/10 Fix that now >.< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 This card can only be activated when your opponent declares an attack. Destroy the attacking monster and inflict damage to your opponent x300 for each level of the destroyed monster (Max. 2000). During your opponent's next End Phase, Special Summon the destroyed monster in face-up Attack Position on your opponent's field. The Special Summoned monster is then treated as an Effect Monster with the following effect: - This card cannot declare an attack unless the card's controller sends the top card of their Deck. Fix'ed your OCG errors. Opponent = opponentevery = each And you don't need to say "the top card of their Deck to the Graveyard" just "top card of their Deck." Other than that good job 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted December 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 This card can only be activated when your opponent declares an attack. Destroy the attacking monster and inflict damage to your opponent x300 for each level of the destroyed monster (Max. 2000). During your opponent's next End Phase' date=' Special Summon the destroyed monster in face-up Attack Position on your opponent's field. The Special Summoned monster is then treated as an Effect Monster with the following effect: - This card cannot declare an attack unless the card's controller sends the top card of their Deck. Fix'ed your OCG errors. Opponent = opponentevery = each And you don't need to say "the top card of their Deck to the Graveyard" just "top card of their Deck." Other than that good job 9.5/10[/quote'] Lol, I'll leave the OCG the way it is. Not much of a difference =/ And thanks for rating (I wish I could get more). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 Seems hideously underpowered; it's essentially a Magic Cylinder that does less damage. Why on earth is it Semi-Limited? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted December 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 Seems hideously underpowered; it's essentially a Magic Cylinder that does less damage. Why on earth is it Semi-Limited? OMGZ' date=' YOU COMMENTED ON MAH CARD =O[/s'] Because due to the last effect, your basically inflicting damage and milling in one card. Call me crazy but I think having 3 of these in your Deck would be .... somewhat ridiculous. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 you forgot to say special summon the destroyed monster to who's side of the field other than that this card looks balanced enough 9.3/10 Fix that now >.< good, then I'll raise the rate to 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted December 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 you forgot to say special summon the destroyed monster to who's side of the field other than that this card looks balanced enough 9.3/10 Fix that now >.< good' date=' then I'll raise the rate to 9.5/10[/quote'] Thanks. Moar comments nao >=( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 Seems hideously underpowered; it's essentially a Magic Cylinder that does less damage. Why on earth is it Semi-Limited? OMGZ' date=' YOU COMMENTED ON MAH CARD =O[/s'] Because due to the last effect, your basically inflicting damage and milling in one card. Call me crazy but I think having 3 of these in your Deck would be .... somewhat ridiculous. Most decks like being milled anyhow, the opponent isn't required to attack with the monster again, and the burn and mill effects point to separate win conditions that don't support one another at all. Besides, one card? Mill decks can't use that. That level of mill is only useful for blocking attacks with Macro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted December 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 Seems hideously underpowered; it's essentially a Magic Cylinder that does less damage. Why on earth is it Semi-Limited? OMGZ' date=' YOU COMMENTED ON MAH CARD =O[/s'] Because due to the last effect, your basically inflicting damage and milling in one card. Call me crazy but I think having 3 of these in your Deck would be .... somewhat ridiculous. Most decks like being milled anyhow, the opponent isn't required to attack with the monster again, and the burn and mill effects point to separate win conditions that don't support one another at all. Besides, one card? Mill decks can't use that. That level of mill is only useful for blocking attacks with Macro. Wow, you got all out to prove your point =/ Okay, now that you've pointed out the flaws, mind trying to fix them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamesgent111 Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 quite nice, and balanced 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted December 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 quite nice' date=' and balanced 8/10[/quote'] You took 2 points off and you didn't even state something wrong with the card -_- What a queer noob rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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