bangge Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 I Make THis so give me rep And comment ok First FORM[/img] Second FORM[/img] Third FORM[/img] Final FORM (Xth)[/img] He Later i Will Make Ovan Card or another hack/gu card soo wait GIVE rep+comment ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 one thing im noticing is its not proper grammar, like some nouns shud be plural but theyr singular. then theres some OCG errors, mostly capitalizing stuff like Normal Summoned, Special Summoned then u got to lowercase stuff like gain. if u look at some real cards, youl get a better idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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