nobartholem Posted December 18, 2009 Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 Polymerization is not needed to play this card. This card can only be summoned by removing from play Darkfire Soldier #1 and Darkfire Soldier #2. When this card is summoned destroy all Non-FIRE monsters on the field. This card is destroyed if there are no FIRE monsters on the field. I'm new to the whole card making thing, so please give good honest feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted December 18, 2009 Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 ...OCG is bad. The pic is iffy to me but it's not bad. The effect is incredibly OP. Im not going to be able to fix your OCG since I'm not entirely sure how. 4/10 Most of the points off are more OP and OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2Dual Posted December 18, 2009 Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 OCG fix:"Darkfire Soldier #1 + Darkfire Soldier #2This card can only be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by removing from play the above cards from your side of the field. (You do not use "Polymerization".) When this card is Summoned, destroy all non-FIRE monsters on the field. If there are no FIRE monsters on the field, destroy this card." a bit OPed, maybe add "This card cannot attack during the turn it is Summoned." to balance it out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nobartholem Posted December 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 a bit OPed' date=' maybe add "This card cannot attack during the turn it is Summoned." to balance it out.[/quote'] I thought that No attacking the turn it is summoned is in the rule book. Oh well. I guess I'll add that. And whats OCG Told you, im new to this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted December 18, 2009 Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 2Dual's OCG correction is accurate. But is remedy for your OP isn't totally correct. Yes that will balance it a tad more but still this effect is to powerful for a monster like this. It'll need much harsher requirements the a simple fusion summona bit OPed' date=' maybe add "This card cannot attack during the turn it is Summoned." to balance it out.[/quote'] I thought that No attacking the turn it is summoned is in the rule book. Oh well. I guess I'll add that. And whats OCG Told you, im new to this. OCG is Official Card Grammar. And no the no attacking the turn it's summoned is only for the first turn of the duel. or otherwise by monster card effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 19, 2009 Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 way too OPed it's easy to maintain on the field, so the drawback obviously isn't enough 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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