Nero™ Posted December 19, 2009 Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 So heres my cards:Ritual:New Cards comming soon.what do you think of it and please post errors.Thanxs to wanderley, Shadow Plasma, Father Wolf , LeoWhen I post more,more people who create images might be up there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted December 19, 2009 Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 kinda goodOCG correctionWhen this card is Summoned or Special Summoned to your side of the field = When this card is Summoned to your field. the is an OCG error with the coin too but i don't can fix cause i not make effects with coins overall it is a pretty basic card 7/10 good trymake more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted December 19, 2009 Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 I'd give it 2200 or 2300 base ATK, 1800 is too weak for a Level 5 to be all that useful. Its effect doesn't really compensate for its low base ATK as it's effect is fairly neutral considering the risk factor. Speaking of its effect, you may want to rethink the tails portion as your opponent may not necessarily control a monster. I'd change the tails portion to "This card loses 500 ATK". Then you'd have a potential 2700/2800 ATK, which isn't beyond reason for a Level 5 monster, and a risk factor of being reduced to 1700/1800 ATK, which is a fair drawback. Use image credit in your posts, not on your Circulation, as that's unrealistic. The Set ID's prefix would be a proper suffix, but the prefix needs to be 4 characters these days, at least the vast majority of the time beginning with a letter and containing no more than 2 numbers. Revised effect including Official Card Grammar: This card is also treated as a Dragon-Type monster. When this card is Summoned, toss a coin. ● Heads: This card gains 500 ATK ●Tails: This card loses 500 ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nero™ Posted December 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 Posted MoreBUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted December 19, 2009 Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 I like the pics :]Treated=treatedmay=canSome OCG errorsEffects are ok8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nero™ Posted December 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 Thanxs for posting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted December 19, 2009 Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 A Few OCG errors, nice Effects not OP'ed or anything7.5/10 Nice.. Oh and comment my set since you pmed me to commenthttp://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-175511.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nero™ Posted December 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 anyone gonna post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 only some minor OCG errors the effects are balanced, slightly dull though 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nero™ Posted December 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 BUMP BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leturn Master Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 alright, quick review. Then bed time: "Snow beast" -- I know a monster that can have 2400 ATK (more than your monster even MIGHT have), looks cooler, and won't benefit your opponent at all. He's called "Luster Dragon #2", and NO ONE uses him because he sucks. If your card is worse... well, think about how bad your card has to be. "Dark Maxed" -- It's a Ritual, so it SHOULD be freaking awesome. But it's not. It's terrible... especially for a Ritual Monster. "Symbol of Darkness" -- Unrelated to the monster... "Robotic Guardian" -- low stats, not a Tuner, and only works on targeting cards. Make him a Tuner monster, and he'll be better. "Dark Virus Sorcerer" -- 'Another' implies that this card is LIGHT, which he isn't. Get rid of the word 'another'. And then make the burn damage 1000/turn... that'll make him sorta useful. "Dark Virus Knight" -- Decrease his ATK and DEF by 500 apiece and have his effect summon "Dark Virus Sorcerer" instead of just adding the card to your hand. That'll make it better. "The Ninja Frogs..." -- useless if it only works on Warrior-Type monsters... and the effect relies too much on chance to be useful anyways. The only cards I'd keep here are "Dark Virus Sorcerer" and "Dark Virus Knight", and both of them need a great amount of pumping up so they can locate themselves at least somewhere underneath the meta... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nero™ Posted December 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 Updated Thread + New Cool Reduction Hero saturnaus previewof the new set Reduction Heros Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Zektor Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 5/10you spelled frogs wrongOK ocgmostly good pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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