vengeful lemonS Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 [align=center][spoiler=monsters 12/15]When this card is Summoned put 5 Bio Counters on this card. When this card destroys a monster by battle remove 1 Bio Counter from this card. Each time a Bio Counter is removed from this card select 1 monster your opponent controls . The selected monster looses 400 ATK points. When there are no Bio Counters on this card is destroyed.When this card destroys a monster in battle add one "Bio Counter" to this card.This card can only be Normal Summoned if your opponent has 2 or more monsters on his/her side of the field. When your opponent's monster destroys a monster on your side of the field with Biometric in its name,add one Bio Counter to this card.This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 8 "Bio Counters" from your side of the field.This card's name is also treated as "Biometric". When this card is Summoned remove all "Bio Counters" from your side of the field. When this card attacks a monster on your opponent's side of the field add 3 "Bio Counters" to one face up card on your side of the field.This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 10 "Bio Counters" from your side of the field.When this card is Summoned put 7 "Bio Counters" on this card. When this card destroys a monster by battle remove 1 "Bio Counter" from this card. When a "Bio Counter" is removed from this card select one of your opponent's monsters, the selected monster looses 700 ATK. When this card has no "Bio Counters" on it remove all cards from your side of the field from the game.This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 10 "Bio Counters" from your side of the field.When this card is Summoned put 7 "Bio Counters" on this card. When this card destroys a monster by battle remove 1 "Bio Counter" from this card. When a "Bio Counter" is removed from this card your opponent is dealt with 200 points of direct damage for each bio counter on your side of the field. When this card has no "Bio Counters" on it remove all cards from your side of the field from the game.When this card is Summoned put 3 "Bio Counters" on it. Once per turn you can remove 1 "Bio Counter" from this card, this card can attack twice during this turn.When this card is Summoned put 5 "Bio Counters" on this card. During your draw phase you can remove 1 "Bio Counter" from this card. You can draw another card. When this card has no "Bio Countrs" destroy this card.When this card is Summoned put 2 "Bio Counters" on this card. This card is uneffected by spell and trap cards. When this card has no "Bio Counters" destroy this card.When this card is Summoned put 6 "Bio Counters" on this card. This card cannot be selected as a target during battle. When this card is targeted by a spell card flip a coin if heads add 4 "Bio Counters" to this card, if tails then remove all "Bio Counters" on this card. When this card has no "Bio Counters" destroy this card. Whenthis card is destroyed you can add 2 "Bio Counters" to a face up monster on your side of the field.When this card is Summoned put 3 "Bio Counters" on this card.when this card is targeted during battle phase,change its poisition after the damage step. if this card is targeted twice during the smae battle phase you can change this card's poisition by removing 1 "Bio Counter", this effect can be used once per turn. When this card has no "Bio Counters" destroy this card. When this card is Summoned put 1 "Bio Counters" on this card. once per turn by removing 1 "Bio Counter" from this card you can add half this card's DEF points to the ATK of a Face up monster. When this card has no "Bio Counters" destroy this card. When this card is Summoned put 9 "Bio Counters" on this card. remove 1 "Bio Counter" from this card during each of your standby phases . When this card has no "Bio Counters" destroy this card. [spoiler=spells 0/10] [spoiler=traps 0/10] [updates][spoiler=monsters] img creditalculaderjazinkay[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 Good to see you again, Train Rides By it should be "Bio Counters", not bio counters The when in the last sentence needs to be capitalized the OCG for the most part is fine, and the effect is balanced since 400 atk isn't too great and therefore it's ok to keep that as a permanent decrease 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeful lemonS Posted December 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 thnx rag. wow i think thats my first 9/10 wow im happy! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jord200 Posted December 21, 2009 Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 heh. begining to think you got permad or something. not half bad. 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeful lemonS Posted December 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 who are you? but thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted December 21, 2009 Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 Not bad, I've seen the image times before but it is pretty good, and the OCG is decent, just a few errors. (ATK points = ATK / your opponent's side of the field = your opponent controls / in battle = by battle / ragnarok already mentioned the Bio Counters, just without the quotations) The card seems fairly balanced, it is a pretty strong beatstick, more so because of the ATK loss effect. However it is still open to card effects, which helps to balance it out. As for playability, the Bimetric Synchron isn't real so it is hard to judge it on that, but otherwise the effect is just reasonably generic field control. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeful lemonS Posted December 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 Not bad' date=' I've seen the image times before but it is pretty good, and the OCG is decent, just a few errors. (ATK points = ATK / your opponent's side of the field = your opponent controls / in battle = by battle / ragnarok already mentioned the Bio Counters, just without the quotations) The card seems fairly balanced, it is a pretty strong beatstick, more so because of the ATK loss effect. However it is still open to card effects, which helps to balance it out. As for playability, the Bimetric Synchron isn't real so it is hard to judge it on that, but otherwise the effect is just reasonably generic field control. 8/10[/quote'] thnx bengal although i think i still did the ATK thing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Half Vamp Riku Posted December 21, 2009 Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 these are freaking sweet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeful lemonS Posted December 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 thnx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Half Vamp Riku Posted December 21, 2009 Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 no prob,wow i sound like rachel ray Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeful lemonS Posted December 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 ok thats not wierd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 21, 2009 Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 TRB, next time when you update can you tell us the name of the cards you updated? I noticed you added two, but which ones? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeful lemonS Posted December 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 oh srry under monsters its they are the two strongest in the archtype Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 21, 2009 Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 ok so basically they're the bottom two of the monsters section? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeful lemonS Posted December 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 yes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 21, 2009 Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 in that case Neptune: "When this card has no "Bio Counters" on it remove all cards from your side of the field from the game." <----should be "When there are no "Bio Counters" on this card, remove all cards on your side of the field from play." the same is true for Vulcan the effects are balanced, but they're too similar, can you make them more apart? 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeful lemonS Posted December 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 ya give me a bit to think about it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted December 21, 2009 Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 These make me think of aliens. They both use counters to lower the enemies attack. The main difference is that your monsters get the counters instead of your opponent. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeful lemonS Posted December 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 well one of my deck decks that i run is an alien so i drew the inspiration for these cards from them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted December 21, 2009 Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 Actually... bio counters ≠ Correct OCG"Bio Counters" ≠ Correct OCGBio Counters = Correct OCG. Just to let you know!!!! - - - By far best pics I've seen. One or two of 'em are overused, but they deserve to be overused! Great cards. *claps* 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeful lemonS Posted December 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 thnx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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