Grunt Issun Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 what chapter do i come in? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted February 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 Chapter 9 has been moved to the last post by me which also contains Chapter 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Percival Cox Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 Yayz a new chapter.... My twin realy needs to chill out XD Turbo duels in this fanfic are up to speed as the ones in the anime(fast paced you have to shout to get a word inXD). Great as always cant wait for the next one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Kip~ Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 the only reason I changed the archetypes was b/c Grasslander your archetype isn't finished and is mostly supported by spells and ur character is gonna be introduced as a turbo duelist In that case, would a Machina Deck work?Im talking the Machina Mayhem Structure Deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 Intresting,but theirs something I can't put right.Anyway good chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted February 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 the only reason I changed the archetypes was b/c Grasslander your archetype isn't finished and is mostly supported by spells and ur character is gonna be introduced as a turbo duelist In that case' date=' would a Machina Deck work?Im talking the Machina Mayhem Structure Deck.[/quote']Umm okay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted March 3, 2010 Report Share Posted March 3, 2010 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted March 6, 2010 Report Share Posted March 6, 2010 Now ive figured it chapter 9 is the 5th chapter with no mistakes.Congrads since a lot of fan fic's have even a little mistake in each chapter. Anyway, can't wait for chapter 10 Shiroi can do it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted March 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2010 Chapter 10 should be Up shortly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted March 7, 2010 Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 Ok then ill be interested. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raiol99 Posted March 9, 2010 Report Share Posted March 9, 2010 Submission/Application FormAppearance: wears a white headband has drowsy brown eyes and brown hair white an white and black jacketName Kawazu Henteko(means strange frog)Duelist Rank:7Deck:frog deckAntagonist or Protagonist?: protagonist Personality:he does not speak but he is very helpful and kind sometimes can he be a little wierd. he has a frog named yuuyou kaeru (mean helpful frog) which he will do anything to protect.Bio:when he was a child a strange group of people burned down his house as a result he vowed to remain silent until he avenged his parents who were killed in the fire. soon after he found a young frog and a deck of yugioh cards hidden in the ruble he named the frog yuuyou kaeru and became a duelist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted March 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 Submission/Application FormAppearance: wears a white headband has drowsy brown eyes and brown hair white an white and black jacketName Kawazu Henteko(means strange frog)Duelist Rank:7Deck:frog deckAntagonist or Protagonist?: protagonist Personality:he does not speak but he is very helpful and kind sometimes can he be a little wierd. he has a frog named yuuyou kaeru (mean helpful frog) which he will do anything to protect.Bio:when he was a child a strange group of people burned down his house as a result he vowed to remain silent until he avenged his parents who were killed in the fire. soon after he found a young frog and a deck of yugioh cards hidden in the ruble he named the frog yuuyou kaeru and became a duelist. ok i'll add you but you wont make an appearance for a while Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted March 14, 2010 Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 seriously when will i apear? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Percival Cox Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 Submission/Application FormAppearance: wears a white headband has drowsy brown eyes and brown hair white an white and black jacketName Kawazu Henteko(means strange frog)Duelist Rank:7Deck:frog deckAntagonist or Protagonist?: protagonist Personality:he does not speak but he is very helpful and kind sometimes can he be a little wierd. he has a frog named yuuyou kaeru (mean helpful frog) which he will do anything to protect.Bio:when he was a child a strange group of people burned down his house as a result he vowed to remain silent until he avenged his parents who were killed in the fire. soon after he found a young frog and a deck of yugioh cards hidden in the ruble he named the frog yuuyou kaeru and became a duelist. Thats a sad bio D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raiol99 Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 ok thanks for adding my character Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 Their is too many strange people in the world where others are angry.Can't wait for chapter 10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted March 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 [align=center]Chapters from 9-until I feel like will be posted on this post [spoiler=Chapter 9 Training Wheels] 2 weeks after the duel with Zosimo and Roy Gordan, the teams turbo dueling training was going along nicely. Kuro (one of the Teishu twins) came up to Shiroi his gray hair glowing in the sunlight. "Shiroi, do you wanna keep the Runner we're letting you use?" Kuro asked. "Of course," I answered quickly. I mean, why wouldn't I? It was the famous Runner that Yusie Fudo used while he was the champion, and while he participated in the Grand Prix. "Well, if you can beat me in a Turbo Duel we'll let you keep it," he said with a evil smile on his face. "Haha you're on," I said excitingly. "Alright tonight on the track," he said walking away from the scene, "I'll call you when it's alright to go down there." -10 minutes later- "ROI!" I said running in to the cafeteria, "They're gonna let me keep Yusie's runner if I can beat Kuro in a Turbo Duel." "Well I see why they made that deal," Roi commented. "Why's that?" I asked. "Kuro is the 2nd best turbo duelist in the city," he said. "Well I just have to bring my A-Game in that case," I replied to his doubtful expression. -5 Hours Later- The hours past as I waited for our duel to begin, but the without warning I heard a voice, "You should put me in your deck for the duel." I looked around and saw my land deck glowing. I looked through the cards and sure enough it was Hero Kid, "Come on dude I won't let you down." I thought about it and replied to him, "Don't see why not." So following a short conversation about how useful he'd be in the duel so I decided to add him and two other Hero Kids' to my turbo deck. Another hour passed and I thought It's ten o'clock. Then my phone rang it was Kuro "Come," is all he said so I walked down to the area where the Runners were kept. I took up to the Ramp that would allow me to merge into the track and there Kuro was waiting for me. "You do know what happens when you lose?" he asked me. "No?" I said confused. "You can't enter the tournament as Turbo duelist," he said with a sly smile. He was well aware that I was the best of the five Guardians on a Runner and it was probably the only chance to even the odds against Akumu. "What?!" I asked surprised. Roi warned me about something like this I thought but if I turn back he'll tell Akana on me and I'll be in major trouble. "Deal," I said. "So lets start," I said hopping on my runner. "So eager to lose," Kuro replied jumping on his own Runner, The Blackbird, he inhereted from his great-grandfather, Crow Hogan. "Speed World 2 activate," we screamed in unision. With that we took off and were speeding. I was first around the corner so I went first. "Draw," I proclaimed. Shiroi's Turn "First I summon Shield Wing in defense mode and place 1 card face down and end my turn," I said. "Draw," Kuro said. SPC TrackerShiroi-1 Kuro-1 "I summon Blackwing - Sirocco the Dawn," he said, "Using his effect he--." "I've seen you use the card before," I said annoyed. "Well fine so you must know what's coming next I summon Blackwing - Gale the Whirlwind," he added like I never interrupted him. "Next, I activate Level Returner so I can lower my Gale's level down to one," he said "Next I tune Gale to Sirocco to summon out one of my most powerful card." Pitch black wings soar again and protect those with your force! Synchro Summon! Destroy Blackwing - Armed Wing!He had a smile on his face. "Now attack his Shield Wing," he said "With---." "Not before I activate Scrap-Iron Scarecrow," I said "Nice try though." "I place one card face down and end my turn," he said. "Draw," I said. SPC TrackerShiroi-2Kuro-2 "I summon Debris Dragon," I said and activate the Speed Spell - Angels Baton."I drew the two cards from Angel Baton's effect and sent one to the Graveyard. "Next," I pronounced, "I tune Debris Dragon to Shield Wing."Great fears drive the norm to insanity, the madness revealed controls all emotion! Synchro Summon! Nightmare Penna!"Go, Nightmare Penna attack his Armed Master with Insanity Nova," I commanded. A black blast emitted from Nightmare Penna's mouth and engulfed the Blackwing monster. Kuro's LP4000+2300-2500=3800 "Draw," screamed an agitated Kuro. SPC TrackerShiroi-3 Kuro-3 "I activate my own Speed Spell - Angel Baton," he announced, "I summon a second Sirocco the Dawn and activate a special ability of a second Gale the Whirlwind." "It's time I don't hold anything back," he added not wearing his usual smile, "Gale tune up Sirocco to Summon out the most powerful card in my deck." Blackened gales become the wings that soar from resolved hope! Synchro Summon! Soar Blackfeather Dragon! Kuro isn't playing anymore with that card out on the field. I thought looks like I'm going to need to step things up. TO BE CONTINUED [spoiler=Chapter 10 Black and White][spoiler=recap]Shiroi was challenged by Kuro for Yusie Fudo's Duel Runner. As the Duel progressed, both duelist Sychro Summoned out monsters but Shiroi's monsters were gaining an early advantage. All of a sudden after Kuro became angered when Shiroi destroyed his Armed Wing. Kuro stated he was holding back on Shiroi and Summoned out his Blackfeather Dragon. "Now GO, Blackfeather Dragon attack his Nightmare Penna with Nova Stream," Kuro commanded his mighty beast. The dragon began to charge up for the attack. Seconds in to the charge a stream of black Lava errupted from the dragons mouth and engulfed Nightmare Penna. "I place one card face down and end my turn." LP TRACKERShiroi's LP-4000+2500-2800=3700 "Draw," I said. SPC TrackerShiroi-4Kuro-4 Shiroi's Turn "I Summon Hero Kid in DEF mode," I said hoping there would be no interruptions, "Then, I activate his special ability which lets me summon as many more Hero Kids as I want and I choose two." "Next, I activate the Speed Spell High Speed Crash," I added, "By releasing one of my Hero Kids I can destroy one of your monsters, and I choose Blackfeather Dragon." Hero Kid luanched himself at Blackfeather Dragon exploding on impact, destroying the mighty dragon. "Next, I attack with both of my Remaining Hero Kids," I commanded as both of the Hero Kid monster's attacked hitting Kuro taking a chunk out of his Life Points. Kuro's Duel Runner slowed down. LP TrackerKuro's LP=3800-(800+800)=2200 SPC TrackerKuro SPC= 4-1=3 "I place one card face down and end my turn," I stated. "Fine, I draw," Kuro said irratated. SPC TrackerShiroi-5Kuro-4 LP TrackerShiroi-3700Kuro-2200 Kuro's Turn "I activate my face down Call of the Haunted," he said, "To bring back my Blackfeather Dragon." "Attack his Hero Kid with Nova Stream," he commanded. "Not before I activate Scrap-Iron Scarecrow," I said. "And not before I activate my Trap Stun," Kuro replied smirking, "To negate its activation of course." My trap card turned to stone and his attack continued as planned as the monster completely engulfed the much weaker Hero Kid. Shiroi's Duel Runner slowed down as his Speed Counters decreased. "Next, I activate one of the effect's of Speed World 2, so I discard one cards to inflict 800 points of damage ," he proclaimed his runner slowing in speed. "I end my turn," Kuro announced. LP TrackerShiroi's LP 3700+(800-2800)=1700Shiroi's LP 1700-800=900 SPC TrackerShiroi SPC=5-2=3Kuro-5-4=1 "Draw," I yelled. SPC TrackerShiroi-4Kuro-2 Shiroi's Turn "I summon Hyper Synchron in attack mode," I said placing the card on the field as soon as I had seen that I drew it, "Next, I activate Call of the Haunted to re-summon my Shield Wing in defence mode." The two monsters appeared on my field as soon as I placed them on the monster card zone. "Get ready to rock and roll, I tune my Hyper Synchron to Shield Wing and Hero Kid to Summon out a beast that can go blow to blow with your own." The shine of the Black Star protects all in its grace! Synchro Summon! Jet with grace, Blackstar Dragon! "Oh don't forget when a dragon type monster is Synchro Summoned with Hyper Synchron it gets an 800 point power boost," I added. "Did I also forget to mention when my Dragon is Synchro Summoned with three plus monsters I get to draw 1 card," I said as I drew. Blackstar Dragon (ATK/3300 DEF/2300) "Now attack his Blackfeather Dragon with Burning Black Comet," I commanded. As I finished the command, my guardian beast opened its mouth and the cold chill of the night faded away, replaced by the burning heat coming form the maw of the great beast. As we took the next turn on the track my beast finished charging his attacked and unleashed a Black comet leaving a black fire trail from the dragon's Mouth. BLackfeather Dragon attempted to counterstrike but was overmatched and destroyed. "When Blackstar Dragon is destroyed by battle I gain life points equal to half of your monsters original attack," I explained to Kuro. "I end my turn meaning Blackstar Dragon is removed from play," I added miserably. LP Tracker Kuro's LP 2200-500=1700Shiroi's LP 100+(2800/2)=1500 "DRAW," Kuro said angered. SPC Tracker Shiroi-5Kuro-3 Kuro's Turn "I activate the Speed Spell-Count Up, so by discarding four cards I get eight Speed Counters, but I won't have them for to long as I activate the Speed Spell-Monster Reborn which let's bring back my Blackfeather Dragon by removing 10 Speed Counters," Kuro exlaimed as soon as his Runner spead up it spead back down, "Now eat this Shiroi." "Blackfeather Dragon finish this duel with Nova Stream," he commanded. SPC Tracker Kuro SPC - 3+8=11Kuro SPC - 11-10=1 "Not before I activate my Blinding Angel Trap Card which means you can't attack until this card is off the field," I yelled. "Fine I end my turn," he said seeming annoyed. "Draw," I said. SPC Tracker Shiroi-6Kuro-2 Shiroi's Turn "I lose 500 life points from my Blinding Angel Trap," I explained to Kuro, "I activate my own Speed Spell Count up and that means by discarding two cards I get four Counters and six plus four equals ten so I can activate this next card Speed Spell - The End of the Storm which destroys every monster on the field and the controller loses 300 life points for every monster seeing how I own no monsters take this," I told him smiling. "Next, I summon the end go Speed Warrior, attack Kuro's life points directly with Sonic Edge," my command was plain and simple and came with no interruptions, "Oh Speed Warrior attack power doubles when it attacks the first turn it's summoned." Speed Warrior jumped with his target in sight he executed a smoot round-house kick hitting Kuro's Runner and ending the Duel. Kuro's runner crashed and mine came to a stop as I came back from my victory lap, and I told him as I took off my helmet,"Good Duel man." "You too Shiroi you deserved to win this time," Kuro said smiling and shaking my hand, "But you won't win next time." "Well I can't wait for the next time we meet on the Track," I said as I pointed to the giant Track. "Well I guess it's my turn then," said a voice which belonged to Kaen, Kuro's twin brother, who came on his duel runner "You duel me now." "No, I think I will," said a shrill voice which belonged to Tenka, on her own Runner. "No one else is dueling tonight," said another, much older voice which belonged to Aka, Tenka's brother, "You're lucky I don't report you kids for this, now get back to your rooms" We all knew we could get in major trouble for after hours dueling so we went back to our rooms without complaining. [spoiler=Chapter 11 The Streets (Preview)]The Guardians leave the "Training Grounds" a week before the G.D.T. and takes Denkiteki a couple of minutes after they arrive back in Duelist City (the real name of the city is, Joukanz btw) to be caught up in Turbo Street Duel where the duelist use normal decks and use a new card named Speed World: Underground. Kit starts off rough seeing how the rules are much different than a real Turbo Duel. The question is, Can Denkiteki win on the streets or risk losing a lot more than the duel.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Kip~ Posted March 17, 2010 Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 good, good, very good. Can't wait to see more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted March 17, 2010 Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 Yep it is good and finaly it's here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted March 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 Sorry but I have decided to make the second Arc or Book 2, about the Dark Signers if you want to make a Dark Signer Character than do the normal thing but you must have Dark Synchro Monster and what not Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted March 18, 2010 Report Share Posted March 18, 2010 There is so much fan fic's with dark signers even I have one.Well it will be good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted March 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 really wouldn't mind if other people read this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted March 24, 2010 Report Share Posted March 24, 2010 There is still others reading but not bothering to post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted April 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 hello let's bump to the max Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Percival Cox Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 BackBiter your still active? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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