Commissar Gig Posted December 21, 2009 Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 Monsters This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field. If this Card is Special Summoned from the deck it is treated as an Effect Monster with the following Effect. ● When this card is Special Summoned you and your opponent must randomly return 1 card to the deck this card gains 300 ATK and DEF for each card returned. This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field. If this Card is Special Summoned from the deck it is treated as an Effect Monster with the following Effect. ● When this card battles your opponent's monster, after damage calculation you can send this Card to the bottom of your deck to send the opponent's monster to the bottom of there deck. This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field. If this Card is Special Summoned from the deck it is treated as an Effect Monster with the following Effects.● When this Card is Special Summoned from the deck return up to 5 cards from either players graveyard to there owners Deck.● Once per turn you can discard 2 cards to return one card on the field to the top of the owner's deck. This card gains 200 ATK for every card returned This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field. If this Card is Special Summoned from the deck it is treated as an Effect Monster with the following Effects.● When a Face-Up “Valindas” monster (Except Guardian of Valindas) would be Destroyed, you can send Guardian of Valindas to the Top of your Deck instead Spells This Spell can not be Set. This Spell can only be played when you control a face up "Valindas" Monster. When this card is played you must pay 500 life points. While this card is face up on the field, any Monster sent to the Graveyard is sent to the bottom of the deck instead. This Spell can not be Set. This Spell can only be played when you control a face up "Valindas" Monster. When this card is played return all Face up Normal Monsters on your side of the field to the top of your deck then shuffle. While this card remains face up on the field you can skip your draw phase to reveal the top card of your deck if its a "Valindas" Monster Special Summon it in either face up ATK or DEF position. If its not a "Valindas" Monster send it to the bottom of your deck. Traps If your opponent controls a monster and you control no monsters, Special Summon 1 Warrior-Type monster from your deck in face up ATK position for each face up monster your opponent controls. There original ATK and DEF are halved. During your next Standby Phase Return the Summoned Monsters to the bottom of your deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 21, 2009 Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 Normal summon and Special summon should be Normal Summon and Special Summon Emergency Draft's pic is unimpressive and effect too dull, add another one for a new member though the OCG is very good, despite some short effects 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted December 21, 2009 Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 The OCG needs work. The drafts pic is just... I don't know if there's a word to describe how bad it is. I like the concept of returning monsters to the deck and then SS them to gain extra effects. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissar Gig Posted December 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 Thank you for the replies I'll try my best to improve my cards Normal summon and Special summon should be Normal Summon and Special SummonOk I'll change that now thank you for the help Emergency Draft's pic is unimpressive and effect too dull' date=' add another one[/quote']I've changed the pic and given it a new effect for a new member though the OCG is very good' date=' despite some short effects 8/10[/quote']Thanks you :D The OCG needs work. The drafts pic is just... I don't know if there's a word to describe how bad it is. I like the concept of returning monsters to the deck and then SS them to gain extra effects. 8/10I've just changed drafts pic and effect I have also updated my other cards I plan to make some more support next to help special summon the monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissar Gig Posted December 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 I've added a couple of new cards to the set have a few more in mind just need to find suitable artwork This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field. If this Card is Special Summoned from the deck it is treated as an Effect Monster with the following Effects.● When a Face-Up “Valindas” monster (Except Guardian of Valindas) would be Destroyed, you can send Guardian of Valindas to the Top of your Deck instead This Spell can not be Set. This Spell can only be played when you control a face up "Valindas" Monster. When this card is played return all Face up Normal Monsters on your side of the field to the top of your deck then shuffle. While this card remains face up on the field you can skip your draw phase to reveal the top card of your deck if its a "Valindas" Monster Special Summon it in either face up ATK or DEF position. If its not a "Valindas" Monster send it to the bottom of your deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 21, 2009 Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 Thank you for the replies I'll try my best to improve my cards Normal summon and Special summon should be Normal Summon and Special SummonOk I'll change that now thank you for the help Emergency Draft's pic is unimpressive and effect too dull' date=' add another one[/quote']I've changed the pic and given it a new effect for a new member though the OCG is very good' date=' despite some short effects 8/10[/quote']Thanks you :D The OCG needs work. The drafts pic is just... I don't know if there's a word to describe how bad it is. I like the concept of returning monsters to the deck and then SS them to gain extra effects. 8/10I've just changed drafts pic and effect I have also updated my other cards I plan to make some more support next to help special summon the monsters. that makes it good enough for me to raise the rate to 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted December 21, 2009 Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 These look interesting. Draft's pic as said is horrible beyond extreme. You can find a better one :D Effects are nice. I would have said they should be Geminis but I found out why they aren't. All in all these are pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissar Gig Posted December 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 that makes it good enough for me to raise the rate to 8.7/10Thank you These look interesting. Draft's pic as said is horrible beyond extreme. You can find a better one :DThat's Actually the replacement Image:( I'll have to find something better then :D Effects are nice. I would have said they should be Geminis but I found out why they aren't. All in all these are pretty good.Thanks for the review I appreciate it I've made some more support they currently lack images so i made a thread in the Written Card sectionhttp://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-176412.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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