Blade360 Posted December 21, 2009 Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 I have been making cards for a while but have never posted that much :) Description: When a monster is attacked your opponent must draw the top card from his deck. Spell: You can destroy one monster on your opponents side of the field. Trap: All cards on your opponents field are sent to their hand except the attacking card. Monster: The attack is cancelled. This card is then put back into your deck and shuffled. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted December 21, 2009 Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 Type it in a continuous matter and try this OCG fix: Activate only when a monster is attacked. Your opponent draws 1 card and reveal it. -- Monster: Negate the attack. -- Spell: You may destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. -- Trap: Return all monsters your opponent controls, other than the attacking monster to their owner's hand. When this card is activated, shuffle it into your Deck. When you're done typing that in, copy the card and paint some dots on the "--" parts using paint or something of the like. This card is also very overpowered, so I would suggest you put a big cost it, such as Tributing a monster. The OCG would then be: Activate only when a monster is attacked and by Tributing 1 monster you control. Your opponent draws 1 card and reveal it. -- Monster: Negate the attack. -- Spell: You may destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. -- Trap: Return all monsters your opponent controls, other than the attacking monster to their owner's hand. When this card is activated, shuffle it into your Deck. Other than that, good try. ^_^ A. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blade360 Posted December 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 Thanks alot, this was the first card I made, I know it isn't that good. Thanks for the criticism Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted December 21, 2009 Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 If this card is your first try, it's very good. Trust me, I've seen much, much worse. :D BTW, click on the purple signet in my sig. You will be directed to N.D.L. (Newb Defense League), where new members and experienced ones have a blast together. You should become a member. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 21, 2009 Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 for a first card, this is very well done yes there's OCG errors, but that's true for everyone's first card anyway the effect is ok, you just need a drawback onto it and everything will be good 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blade360 Posted December 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 Yea, I need to work on OCG, thanks ragnarok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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