έκλειψη Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 Please rate? I really hope my first try wasn't that bad.Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 LIGHT or WATER monsters you control. When this card is successfully destroys a monster in battle, add 1 Tsunami Counter (Max. 6) on this card. Remove 3 Tsunami Counters from this card to inflict 800 points of damage to your opponent. This card can be removed from play from your Graveyard to add 1 "Kurayue - Dragon of the New Moon" from your Deck to your Hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
everlasting Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 there are two OCG errors I could find, and they are pretty minor. If you post the effect, I'll fix them (I'm just too lazy to re-write the entire effect). But this is really good coming from a new member. 8.9/10, for now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ExtremeG Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 Wow, really impressive for a new member. But it's Tsunami Counters. Tokens are stand-in monsters, counters are things you put on monsters. 9.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GunMetalDevil Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 cards pretty decent, u just have some OCG errorsit should say:"When this card successfully destroys a monster as a result of battle, add 1 Tsunami Counter (Max 10) to this card. You can remove 5 Tsunami Counters from this card to inflict 800 points of damage to your opponent." really good for your first try and the pic is cool 7.5/10fix it and ill give it a 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
έκλειψη Posted December 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 LIGHT or WATER monsters you control. When this card is successfully destroys a monster in battle, add 1 Tsunami Counter (Max 10) to this card. Remove 5 Tsunami Counters from this card to inflict 800 points of damage to your opponent. Effect, posted for Everlasting. I think I fixed it; I did everything you said, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
everlasting Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 LIGHT or WATER monsters you control. When this card is successfully destroys a monster in battle, add 1 Tsunami Counter (Max 10) to this card. Remove 5 Tsunami Counters from this card to inflict 800 points of Direct Damage to your opponent. Almost perfect OCG.....really, really good for a new member. If you need any help in the future, let me know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Mousy Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 You have potential. I will see it that you become a high ranking member of The Organization. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
έκλειψη Posted December 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 Fixed now. Uhm... Organization...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Mousy Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 Click the link in my signature. It's the rankings of card makers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 Win New Member right here.. Beautiful OCG, Nice Background, Balanced... 8.5/10 + 1 Rep..I give reps to spectacular New Members ^^. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
έκλειψη Posted December 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 Amazing...I'll be sure to remember such... First I find it best If I can remember card wording enough to get it perfect every time. I'm guessing a mistake in the wording would devastate a score in a tournament, would it not? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 I think so,Man-Eater Bug (Qualified): FLIP: Destroy 1 card.Man-Eater Bug (Disqualified): FLIP: Detroy 1 card.So yeah, and ohh if you have any questions regarding Yugioh Card Maker or Forum just ask! And Merry Christmas! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
έκλειψη Posted December 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 Merry Christmas to you as well. ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 very good OCG for someone new, the lore was a little hard to read though the effect is a little slow though, I'd drop the max counters to 6, and remove 3 for the burn effect, it's only 800 damage after all And like your other card, it too should have another effect besides the burn effect 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
έκλειψη Posted December 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 I alterred the Counter amount as requested and added an effect allowing you to add Kurayue to your Hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 yeah, MUCH more balanced and interesting now I'll raise my rate to 9.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
έκλειψη Posted December 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 Thanks! Happy Holidays. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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