Structure Deck -in progress- : Everlasting Dusk -UPDATE: A LOT MORE CARDS-

[.ttoo.]

[align=center][spoiler= Monsters] [spoiler= EN01] [spoiler= Lore] This card is treated as a Spellcaster-type Monster. If this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard Special Summon it during your next Battle Phase. Increase the ATK of this card by 200 for each card in your opponent's hand.

 

 

 

[spoiler= EN02] [spoiler= Lore] A fiend made of a goo formed by curses, nightmares and ice.

 

 

 

[spoiler= EN03] [spoiler= Lore] A card destroyed by this card is removed from play. This card loses 500 ATK and DEF for each card removed from play. If this card's ATK and DEF is 0 destroy this card.

If destroyed by this effect Special Summon one Fiend-type monster with 1700 DEF or less in face-up attack position.

 

 

 

[spoiler= EN04] [spoiler= Lore] This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:

o The original ATK of this card becomes 3100.

 

 

 

[spoiler= EN05] [spoiler= Lore] Once per turn you can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon a Card from your graveyard. This card's ATK becomes the same as that card's. This card cannot be targeted by the effects of Spells, Traps or Effect Monsters.

 

 

 

[spoiler= EN06] [spoiler= Lore] This card cannot be destroyed by battle.

 

 

 

[spoiler= EN07] [spoiler= Lore] This card gains 500 ATK for each Fiend-type monster on your side of the field

 

 

 

[spoiler= EN08] [spoiler= Lore] Once per turn, you can tribbute a Fiend-type monster from your side of the field to have this card gain 300 ATK

 

 

 

[spoiler= EN09] [spoiler= Lore] Each Battle Phase Special Summon 1 Masked Token (Fiend-Type/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 50/DEF 50).Tribbute 4 Masked Token to inflict 500 damage to your opponent.

 

 

 

[spoiler= EN10] [spoiler= Lore] If this card was Special Summoned decrese its level by 5. Each standby phase destroy a monster Special Summon a Plague Insect Token(Insect-type/WIND/Level 5/ATK 0/DEF 0) in its place.

 

 

 

[spoiler= EN11] [spoiler= Lore] This polar sea monster aterrorized fiends over centuries.

 

 

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[spoiler= EN20] [spoiler= Lore] Select 3 monsters, while this card reains face-up on the field, only those monsters can attack and change battle positions

 

 

 

[spoiler= EN21] [spoiler= Lore] As long as this card remains face-up on the field, only Fiend and Spellcaster-type monsters can declare attacks. Destroy this card on the 6th turn it is face-up. Then move "nowhere" from your deck to your hand.

 

 

 

[spoiler= EN22] [spoiler= Lore] The monster equiped with this card can only be a Fusion material monster, that card doesn't need Polymerization to Fusion Summon, And the monster resulting from that Fusion Summon gains 600 ATK and DEF.

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler= Extra Deck] [spoiler= EN41] [spoiler= Lore] "Possessed Bird" + 1 or more non-tuner monsters.

 

 

[spoiler= EN42] [spoiler= Lore] "Tedraz, The dusk emperor" + "Makara, Nowhere knight"

This card gains 100 ATK for each card on your Graveyard.

 

 

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[spoiler= Some cards w/ holos (not corrected on OCG) ]

 

 

[spoiler= Principal card] [spoiler= Lore] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-tuner monsters

This card's type can be treated as any type. This card is unnafected by the effect of "Nowhere".

 

 

[ragnarok1945]

ok NOW I can see the card, stupid computer problems

 

the picture is a bit overused though

 

8.3/10

[.oott.]

It's OP. 4400?? 4/5

[Twig]

Make it 100 instead of 200. Maybe you should give the revival effect a drawback, like you must dicard 1 card or something like that. 8/10

[GunMetalDevil]

not bad, pic is overused tho

 

7.5/10

[.ttoo.]

It is the principal card. Most of those are Over Powered.

[Leturn Master]

uhhh... totally NOT overpowered. It takes 2 Tributes, and it has crazy-high ATK, so the only chance your opponent has of killing it is (probably) a card effect (which is EASY to pull off. In fact, I'd advocate AGAINST this guy, because he doesn't have any invulnerabilities to Spells, Traps, or monster effects).

 

It's like a reciprocal of "Nephthys". I really like. It's sweet. Especially with the shinies.

 

Heck, this work deserves a +rep.

 

:mrgreen:

[.ttoo.]

Leturn Master, thanks. I'll buddy you. Look at the new ones.

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uhhh... totally NOT overpowered. It takes 2 Tributes' date=' and it has crazy-high ATK, so the only chance your opponent has of killing it is (probably) a card effect (which is EASY to pull off. In fact, I'd advocate AGAINST this guy, because he doesn't have any invulnerabilities to Spells, Traps, or monster effects).

 

It's like a reciprocal of "Nephthys". I really like. It's sweet. Especially with the shinies.

 

Heck, this work deserves a +rep.

 

:mrgreen:

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Actually those cards where my first ones to EVER post

[Pixel.]

I like your cards a lot especially the holo ones (Hint hint) lol. Not OP and good pics.

[EHN.]

These are actually extremely good cards!!

I like the holos!

9.89/10

[.oott.]

I like the card Road to nowhere 7/10 and Nowhere 8/10

[pherronboy]

5.8/10 op'ed and some ocg errors, nice effort though

[.ttoo.]

Someone point out the errors please.

[♠Decietful King♠]

These are pretty good good effects pretty good OCG for a new guy and and good pics 8.5/10 (seen alot of these pics before)

[pherronboy]

This card is treated as a Spellcaster-Type Monster. If this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the graveyard Special Summon it during your next Battle Phase. Increase the ATK of this card by 200 for each card in your opponent's hand.

 

This card is treated as a Spellcaster-type Monster. If this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon it during your next Battle Phase. Increase the ATK of this card by 200 for each card in your opponent's hand.

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A card destroyed by this card is removed from play. This card loses 500 ATK and DEF for each card removed from play. If this card's ATK and DEF is 0 destroy this card.

If destroyed by this effect Special Summon a Fiend-type monster with 1700 or less DEF in face-up attack position.

 

A card destroyed by this card is removed from play. This card loses 500 ATK and DEF for each removed from play card. If this card's ATK and DEF is 0, destroy this card.

If destroyed by this effect, Special Summon oneFiend-type monster with 1700 DEF or less in face-up attack position.

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o The original ATK of this card becomes 3100. op

 

mainly comma errors

I'll do the rest later.

[Zeroke]

I see some spelling errors such as "unnafected" should be "unaffected" on Terger. Nice pics.

[Leturn Master]

Your cards IDs should have an extra "0". As in EN002 and EN003, instead of EN02 and EN03.

 

Annnd it looks like someone else is doing OCGSP, so I'll do balance and visuals.

 

EN02 -- Should be "Lellarap". I don't get the name. It confuses me.

 

EN03 -- I don't like the comma right after "Erutrot" in the card name... or the fact that the "D.D." isn't at the beginning. I recommend changing this card to "D.D. Destructor - Erutrot" or "D.D. Destrutor, Erutrot". The balance is nice, I like it, but this card looks better as a DARK monster... and the white background just drives me nuts...

 

EN04 -- Hmmmmm.... 3100 ATK. I don't like it. I can see an OTK here and it bugs me. Knock the ATK down to 2400-2500 and you'll be OK... depending on what status you want this card at (Limited, Semi-Limited, or Banned) you could increase the ATK more...

 

oh, and aren't all "Reaper" monsters Zombie-Type? Doesn't that make more sense too?

 

EN05 -- ummmmmm Banned. That is a concept that's just TOO powerful.

 

EN06 -- it's "Posessed", not "Possessed"... and this card would be banned. WAY too strong (in the good meta, you can use this for stall AND when you need to save your butt... as in, using it to Summon "Black Rose"...)

 

EN07 -- hmmm... kinda like "Goblin King"... they're both bad cards, but I like this. Booster-worthy. Nice pic too.

 

EN08 -- Same problem with the name here as in EN03. You should call this guy "Demon Bounty Hunter - Tareart" or "Demon Bounty Hunter, Tareart"... at least capitalize "Demon Bounty Hunter". He's not super-useful, and he should be a DARK monster (seeing as he's a DEMON and all that)... but it's OK.

 

EN09 -- Same problem as above. "The Masked Messenger - Kirtex" or "The Masked Messenger, Kirtex". And his effect is terrible. If you're going for the 500 LP burn damage, make it 1 Token per burn. If you're going for the 4-Token Tribute, make the damage 4000 LP. That'll make the card look awesome.

 

EN10 -- TOTALLY USELESS. But it's a booster pack... most cards are useless...

 

EN11 -- Same name problem.... but "Fiend Eater" should be "Fiend-Eater"... I like the card idea, but the lore makes me VERY confused. I don't understand it... like, at all.

 

EN20 -- OP. Very much so. Total lockdown on your opponent, especially with something that makes it easy to get out 3 monsters, like "Ojama Trio" or "Scapegoat"... This would be banned... if it were even released.

 

EN21 -- Ehhh... It supports only certain Decktypes... and it'd need to last 6 turns in order to get that Banned card to your hand. hmhmhm... I see use in stall Decks, though it'd be sidedecked in order to be useful so Typed Decks wouldn't totally kill the strategy... I'm not sure. Someone better than me should figure this out.

 

EN22 -- Interesting idea. Sounds cool, but the name bothers me. The apostrophe at the end signifies that there are multiple... but without an article at the beginning... well, it's just weird. I think it would look better as "Fiend's Handy Gift" or "The Fiends' Handy Gift"... either way, you've forgotten to capitalize "Handy" and "Gift", so you'll need to change it anyway.

 

EN41 -- I don't see the pyros... or the kinetics.... and why would I -2 or even -3 myself for this guy? It's basically like summoning BEWD... but with worse stats, and a Tribute Requirement.

 

EN42 -- Well, one of the cards to summon this guy is Banned, but you could pull of a Summon with "The Dark - Hex-Sealed Fusion", "Elemental Hero Prisma", or some substitute card... but why would you do that? He's just a beatstick, and not a great one at that... no multiple attacks, no invulnerabilities, nuthin'. Just bonus ATK points (and he's going to average out at around 3000-ish, so he's no better than BEWD again, just the fact that he's a Fusion Monsters and he's got more DEF.)... not much better than EN41...

 

Principal Card --- Well, "Nowhere" would be Banned... so he's kind of useless. I'd also give him some more effects, especially if he's going to be the Feature Card. Not much else to say, here.

 

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All in all, it's decent for a Booster Pack. Most cards aren't good, but a few are awesome. You need some more decent cards (that are kind of useful, but kind of not... you don't have enough of those) and more cards that look really good but don't do jack... always good to have those guys. Just to fill up space and add realism.

 

EDIT: Wait... a Structure Deck? Then NO! These cards make me SAD. You need a better strategy, because things really don't work here.

 

btw, you should make "Terdaz" your cover. That'd get rid of that not-so-useful Fusion Monster, as well as your bad Feature Card. Plus, you can refocus your strategy around him, instead of your "Nowhere" Field Spell and all that....

 

that's all. Good luck to you!

 

:mrgreen: