Demon Eyes Kyo Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 Flavour text: Above the syndrome of battle, his trident has shown many the way to their end. He does not kill because he wants to, but because his soul is driven by the apocalypse.He strove to determine who could defeat him, for 300 years he has searched, but to no availAnother!Lore:When this card battles with a DARK monster, Special Summon the destroyed monster to your side of the field after damage calculation.Another!Flavour Text:Master of the crescent blade, he has defeated over 4000 opponents, without taking a scratch.Another!Lore:This card can only be equipped to "Ronin-The Dark Knight Of The Crescent".Increase the attack of the equipped monster by 1000 points. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.The equipped monster cannot attack your opponents life points directly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 Nice pic, and evened out stats, but don't create Vanillaz. We no longer accept Normal Monsters, and would prefer you create Effect Monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon Eyes Kyo Posted December 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 *sigh*I wish valian was here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neil Moffatt Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 No need, I'm a big supporter of Normal Monsters. Stats are balanced and the picture is suited to the name. Interserting story on the card, could lead to a great set, especially if you make an opposite of this card with a similar story, to make it seem like the two are only equal with each other. Overall, 9/10, seriously, good card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon Eyes Kyo Posted December 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 wow thanks *gets onto set* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neil Moffatt Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 No problem, and iif you ever want help with the set, PM me, 'cuz it seems really interesting.It seems you left out some of the effect, LOLZ. Is this it? "When this card battles with a DARK monster, after damage calculation, Special Summon the destroyed monster to your side of the field." Don't mind me if I'm wrong, I'm just guessing...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 give the vanilla some spell/trap support the effect monster is fine the way it is for OCG 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon Eyes Kyo Posted December 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 BUMP Thanks and added new card... wi ll get spell&traps soonanyone please?:oops:*sigh* :oops: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 your new card is only a vanilla, it needs spell/trap support to make it good 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neil Moffatt Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 God, I'm gonna start a war here too. The card's picture is suited to the name, but the stats are just a little bit out of balance. Still, that aside, 8/10, very good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
waterwhip Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 Pretty good but the way you wrote the effect monster's effect makes no sense i give it a 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon Eyes Kyo Posted December 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 BUMP and what do you mean "no sense" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon Eyes Kyo Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 BUMP and added support card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon Eyes Kyo Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 that equip card's effect is dull I'd still use Axe of Despair instead of that 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon Eyes Kyo Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 EDITED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 ok NOW it looks a little better with the piercing damage effect added in, I'll raise the rate to 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon Eyes Kyo Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Thanks!:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon Eyes Kyo Posted December 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 BUMP Anymore ideas? Should I add anything more? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon Eyes Kyo Posted December 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 You need BG for 2nd card. You dont need to make ''Frostosaurus'' cards! LVL 6 with 2600 ATK? make it Level 7 or LVL 6 with 2500 or less ATK!Otherwise, nice cards, but create a support for all of them with Spell/Traps.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 I lol'd at the thread title, forgive me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon Eyes Kyo Posted December 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 BUMP please comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
£>-ShådøwBøx-<3 Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Finally someone gives a a vanilla a support card... but that aside i think the tetsaiga pic was blurred and the effect of Pellious is kinda bland, why not give him a support? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon Eyes Kyo Posted December 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 Any other comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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